Rate: 7/10

Thoughts: I really don't like Science Fiction that well because it doesn't really spark my interest. But this book manged to spark my instrest, which is rare a thing since it's Science Fiction.

Others: You need to work on your tab spacing. I've said it in a chapter and I know it's only a Wattpad book, but it makes the book look more professional if you did tab space it. At times it's just werid when you would tab a paragraph or sentence, then later on the wouldn't be tabbed. Make to sure tab becuase it's always a rule in grammar, speaking of grammar your grammar is great.

Payment: Read two chapters of my book The Seven Sinners and make sure to comment and vote if you enjoyed it.

Author: SpaceAdventurer_11