Rate: 8

Thoughts: Like how you start off the chapter but you could explain the world of Atharia a bit more. Like the surroundings of it and what or how it feels like for the main characters or characters there.

Others: I like the story so far and hope for you to continue with the time you have. Make sure to check your grammar although your pretty good on it so far

storyofangels

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