Rate: 6/10

Thoughts: You need to work on paragraphs spaces and put periods at the end of some of your sentences. I got lost at times with the paragraphs put together and thought this person was speaking when it was really this person.

Other: I believe this book and blossom into something better if you put your time and effort into it. Not saying you don't, but if you do what I recommend at the top then I think people would enjoy it more and won't get lost as easily.

Author: ToshiKao-Love