Rate: 7.5/10

Thoughts: Why 7 out of 10 is becuase the second chapter is already confusing. You need to explain what 'chara' (hopefully I spelled it right) and what the other stuff is or the reader is going to get lost and doesn't know what's going on.

Others: I like the story so far but just got confused by everything. Hopefully if you add in a bit more chapters I'll change my rating.

Author: roaster1202