Rate: 8/10

Thoughts: I love how you use Japanese in their for the character and put translations for the people who don't know how to read it know what she's saying. I also like how you're making the relationship between the main character and Lui slowly blossom and not just love each other off the bat

Others: Your English could use some work but I understand becuase English is a tough language to learn :)

Author: omg_juley