Rate: 9/10

Thoughts: I really like the book! Well paced setting and good character development so far. I loved the scene where the paper lit on fire and everyone freaked out. Also, I would suggest putting more dialog during the scene where they're thinking. It not only gives character, but a way of how they would speak.

Other: You're grammar is great so far and I'll read the rest in my spare time I have.

Payment: Read my Book The Seven Sinners and see in the request chapter about the rules.

Author: obsessive_bookwcrm