Rate: 7.5/10

Thoughts: I really liked the book, but some parts I know I've already discussed with you is the grammar and paragraph breaks. I'll help you if you want. Other than that I really like the even plot and flow of the book and how the characters slowly are developed in each chapter

Others: Love the book so far and hope you'll update soon, but don't rush yourself.

Payment: Read two chapters from my book The Seven Sinners.

Author: zenzen1974