KanhaiyakiSakhi9112 's book had a good start but it could be improved by adding some more details. You can write like this:

> A palanquin was carried by four men through the dense forest, surrounded by a group of soldiers on horseback. Inside the palanquin, a princess sat nervously, wondering what awaited her at the end of the journey.

This sentence introduces the main character and the setting of the story.

I enjoyed the humor and sarcasm in the dialogues. The protagonist seems to be a witty and clever character who loves and teases her brother.

I like how you used short sentences and paragraphs to keep the reader's attention and create a natural flow of conversation.

I wonder how the story goes!

So fellow writers and readers do try out this book if you love Historical fiction and Mahabharata fictional stories! And comment your review in this chapter.