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In no particular order, the results :

Reagan Economics
brhr14

97 / 100

Wow! Just wow! I've got absolutely no words to describe this story. The story description itself is so intriguing that I couldn't wait to read the whole story. Then the first chapter, it was so intense and had the capability of hooking the readers right into it. The cover could be a little better but other than that, I've got absolutely no complaints. This was the first out of five books I read and I'm so glad it was. The writing style is impeccable. This book constantly puts the readers on edge throughout the story and keeps them wanting for more. I believe it's one of the best mystery/thriller books I've read on Wattpad and will be that way for a long time. Kudos to the author! 

Meet Me At The Airport
tuliptwist

93 / 100

A really, really thrilling book! Gave me goosebumps in every chapter! Reading the first few sentences, I'd thought this was as normal as any other story but boy was I wrong!

The plot is so good and the writing style lovely! I absolutely enjoyed every  chapter I read, desperately trying to be patient but failing, of course. The story has a power to keep the readers hooked and utterly curious for more, which is exactly how any mystery/thriller story should be. I felt that the cover was slightly... bland as compared to the story so the author might want to make it more interesting because the story is completely, way better than the cover suggests. I also suggest the author give a little more detail in the story description, just so that the readers get a rough idea about the story, so that they're intrigued to actually read the story.

Then, I personally feel that the font style would be better if changed. The bold italics format that the author has used, can make the whole text look bulky and unattractive. It's a minor thing but can indirectly create a difference. So I'd suggest the author to maybe interchange the font style, that is, the normal font for the main text and bold italics, or simply just italics for the text messages. The name of the sender/receiver could be in bold.

These are really the minor issues, as I've said. The thing is, the story has a really unique and a gripping storyline. I would love to read it to its end!

The Unscrambler
therealtroubletimes

95 / 100

I loved every sentence of the book! Like seriously. The cover, in my view, could've been a little more attractive. But once you get past that and into the story description, the book would give the readers the greatest time of their lives. The story description is really intriguing and every chapter from the very first one had me laughing hard as well as sporting wide eyes on the words, afraid that I'd miss something. It's got the perfect combination of humor and thrill with an equally impressive storytelling.

The only thing I had a bit of a qualm about was that maybe it resembled Sherlock Holmes a little too much, what with the new roommate, the detective, the characters' description and such. But that's really not an issue since who doesn't like Sherlock? I've got to say, I'm definitely gonna follow up with this story soon to its very end!

Falling For Her
_Inaayat_

84 / 100

The cover is really illustrative. I loved the cover and the story description is equally captivating. The story has a unique plot, and has originality. The thing I found some shortcomings was with grammar and punctuation. There were quite a handful of instances where there were mixed tense in the same paragraph. I'd suggest the author try and break down some long, bulky paragraphs into multiple shorter ones so that it is more systematic.

The next thing is, I notice some non-English words, maybe it's Hindi or Urdu? It would've been better if those words were italicized and translation was given in the same chapter so that the readers don't get confused. There were some other instances where I felt like there was a little bit more rambling than necessary so the author might want to look at that, too. But apart from all these, I love the story and its unique and intriguing storyline. I truly think that this story has a lot of potential with some editing.

With Love, Your Killer
Salmaumar73

92 / 100

The story has a great beginning, a suspense right from the start. The story description is intriguing and apt with the plot. I thoroughly enjoyed all five chapters I've read so far. However, there are some places that I wish to call for attention at.

The changes of POVs and time lapses were really good and systematic, but at times, it all got a little too hard to keep up with, in my view. While these short glimpses made the story more interesting, it somewhat felt like they were disturbing the flow of the story, in some way. Personally, I'd prefer it if the author included some bits about any particular incident pertaining to a character within a certain time frame in the form of the said person's inner thinking or conversation instead of introducing multiple such glimpses continuously in a few chapters. You can give such detailed POVs of the incidents only when they're really needed, or an important part of the story. Another thing is, I felt like there was a bit more of telling rather than showing. The character's thoughts, feelings or behaviors could be better shown in the form of actions as compared to telling the readers about them. That way, there's more visualization involved and more understanding of the characters. Some description of physical attributes of the major characters could be appreciated, too.

Anyways, these are the only things I found that could be said as errors (if they can even be called that, since the book is quite perfect). But other than that, there's little to no space for improvement.  The grammar is pretty good with minimal to no errors, and it did not lack originality. I truly believe that this story is a really good work that has the ability to keep the readers soaking up every word and eagerly waiting for more chapters. Would love to binge read the book!

Fatal Intent
ellamaduka

89 / 100

'Fatal Intent' was a really good book with a great start, lovely grammar, great description and a talented author. The description definitely drew me in but still there are a few things that need to be pointed out. The first thing would be about your cover. For such a great book, you have a plain cover. Covers are not all about being able to see the title, but also what the cover tells so for this reason, you should definitely change your cover. Your first chapter was interesting, with everyone saying 'Meet me at one'. It really got me attached but I would say that it was a tad bit confusing because you threw too many characters in, and those characters had unique names which, for me, were very easy to forget. Right now, the only names I can remember are Sara and Derek? Also, your dividers were not attractive ( I mean the *** *** *** in between your chapters). The rest of your book was pretty good and it definitely deserves some huge titles, so kudos!

The Sober Psychos
AleenaDiAngelo

80 / 100

The book had an amazing storyline alongside fresh characters that were mice to read and interesting chapters. Only suggestions that I would make are that you should change your cover and come up with a catchy description.

Eighteen O'Five
Dhimeji7

74 / 100

A great book that depicts the nature of the author and gives the readers an insight to his tradition. Editing is, however, needed. My suggestion would be for you to ask for your score sheet and work on all areas you were marked down.

My Journey To You
TheAlien09

93 / 100

I didn't quite understand the title, and it will be better if you do explain its relevance to me. Your cover is pretty nice, because it matches with your title but I am sure you can get a better cover than that. The 'journey' inside the silhouettes makes a lot of sense but what I don't understand is the people inside the people. The cover could also use a better font. Your blurb was pretty catchy but I spotted a mistake in it. "But when he moves from New York to Port Douglas to finish his senior year of high school, he didn't expect to —" I am pretty sure the underlined part was supposed to be 'doesn't' and not 'didn't'. Other than that, your description was pretty intriguing.

Your first chapter started nice but there were grammatical errors and minor mistakes that you made, for example, where 'Wtf' was included in the dialogue. If the character was actually saying it, I'm sure they said the full thing and not the abbreviation, so things like that could reduce marks. Your characters were spec, originality on point, pace and plot, perfect and I would have enjoyed it more if I wasn't a grammar police. Overall, good job.

Murder At Ivywood
QueenofRohan

80 / 100

I'm not a fan of your title because I feel like it says a lot already, but I never said it was bad, but I'm not just a fan. Your blurb was nice, but I spotted grammatical errors. In the book too there were quite a good number of them. 'Murder At Ivywood' was a pretty good book, but I couldn't quite get the genre from the first chapter. If your book is a Mystery book, your readers should be able to know even without you revealing it to them. Your descriptions were very nice and characters were quite hard to pick out, but all in all, it was a good read.

Strangers But Not So Strangers
missashrafi

70 / 100

This book was interesting to read though I did notice some things that put off the book's potential. For example, the emojis in between stories are unique but in some situations, it ruins the atmosphere we are reading.

Secondly, the description skills need to be spoken about! The opening chapter began with a guy sitting in a car. A simple sentence as that was made into something amazing enough that I felt I was sitting beside him in the car! The narrating made me feel like I can picture it in my head! That was amazing! But there was a downside in the opening chapter too. When it started, it was great, but out of nowhere the guy was kidnapped. (That paragraph was too vague.)

Those two things are the only thing I found negative about the book! It has diverse characters and culture so it's unique but it needs to be revised on the plot's pace to be perfect.

Hidden Within
JariaMirza14

90 / 100

One word for this book- Amazing. This book deserves more recognition! I love the plot, title, description, everything! The pace of the story is not too fast or too slow but just enough to keep us on the edge of our seats! Each chapter has a very strong ending and we can see how much the author thought everything out. We can read and realise the passion behind each word. And I was surprised to note that there were literally no grammar mistakes or even a wrong punctuation mark! It definitely made me happy because it made me want to read the book more. Mysterious and intriguing, the author manages to keep us interested all throughout the book!

Can One Keep A Secret
queensalsabeel

87.5 / 100

This book was easily one of the most awesome books in this category. I like how it has so many mystery elements in it. Usually even in the Mystery genre, authors bring more importance to romance than the plot itself. I'm happy to say that this book stands out from the rest. From the title to description to cover, everything was begging me to read it. And the descriptions are on point! Not too vague or too large, they were just the right amount. I really like this book and love how suitable it is for someone who just wants to curl up with a murder mystery book on a cold rainy night. The book made me nostalgic to all the times I read Agatha Christie! I love everything about this book!

Saving My Childhood Savior
aditi902

76 / 100

 I loved the diversity and originality of this book! It was such an interesting read! But with that said, I do have to point out the punctuations need to be reviewed a bit because all of them are not accurate. The characters' personalities are interesting but the plot went a teeny bit too fast. If it is slowed down and more descriptions are added, this book would be much more amazing than it already is! The titles of each chapter are amazing. Using I don't notice the titles of chapters but these were so well thought out that I just went- "Wow okay."

Love the plot and characters! Once it is revised, I'm sure it would be perfect!

The Huntress
FmEver

86.5 / 100

My first impression was this book is going to be like the rest of the books about supernatural Hunters. But I was pleasantly surprised by the originality! All supernatural books take place in a way that characters already know supernatural is normal. But this book is far more realistic. There was this one paragraph on how humans made supernatural creatures to fairytales and I think it made the book more interesting! And I have to talk about the opening chapter! It was so strong and made me want to read more! I can still remember the last sentence. "Her name was Laurel Creed and this is her story" -That was such a strong ending! This book is definitely a hidden gem.

Midnight Mist
FatimaFizza

62 / 100

First of all, I really loved the freshness in the plot. Kudos to the author for that. 

Coming to the story, the writing style was more like that of a short story. The length of the chapters and dialogues were quite short. It was difficult to trace the emotions and traits of every character. Noticeable grammar mistakes were there. All the very best.

The Eight Cycles Of Immortality
oldpuzzle

87 / 100

A neatly written story. The author had planned and penned down the story very well. I like the way of writing. But I think the cover is too simple for this story(personal opinion). Apart from that, a book worth reading.

Shades Of Red
kelladaisy113

78. 5 / 100

The story is in infancy, so I'm unaware of the main theme/story. But, from the chapters I've read, I could realize that it's going to be a great story. The story is quite intriguing from the first chapter itself. A special appreciation to the author for not making the protagonist a nerd. But, I think the author should've avoided or twisted the cliches in the first chapter like the protagonist waking up in the morning to get ready for school, badass cheerleader, rich - spoiled brat - playboy, etc. Apart from that, I enjoyed reading the story, and the author's way of writing is also great. I'm sure that this book would satisfy  Mystery / Thriller / Fantasy / Teen-fiction lovers. 

Raven
SugaKookies05

67 / 100

It's a BTS fanfiction. The story is from the reader's point of view. The clarity about the characters' emotions, feelings and thoughts were less. It's a good story btw. All the best.

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Lock & Key
SelenaJones_Vampires

77 / 100

Enjoyed reading it. A good option for Vampire fiction lovers. Need to work on expressing the inner thoughts of the characters more.

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F I R S T P L A C E

Reagan Economics — brhr14

S E C O N D P L A C E

The Unscrambler — therealtroubletimes

T H I R D P L A C E

My Journey To You — TheAlien09


Meet Me At The Airport — tuliptwist

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