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Raavi pov

Two days have been passed since we came here.... The two day has been fun, like I really enjoy it....  in this two days everyone were busy in weddings preparations... Like talking with the decorators, workers, caterers  etc..

I spend most of my with rish planing about things and all..... Aur ha mein shiva se bhi baat karti hoon lekin pehli ki tara close nahi hoon.... I mean casual baatein karti hoon bass.... Kyuki abb aur bardaasht nahi ho raha!!! Isliye jinta dur reh sakti hoon utna rehti hoon!!! Apne dil ko aur nahi dukha sakti na isliye!!!! 🥺

Rishita - raavi lights off karde na.... Kal subha humein mandir bhi toh jana ka... Please ,apni diary kal likh lena !!! (In sleepy voice)

I look at her n smile

Yeh ladki bhi na!!!! 😙

As I look at my phone, it was already 11:30 PM...

Itna late ko gaya aur mujhe pata bhi nahi chala ... Abb so jaati hoon. Kal mandir bhi jaana hai!!!

I turn off the light n closed my eyes!!!
Tomorrow we all were going to Shiv ji mandir as uncle told that before starting any rasam, it's better if we take God's blessings n then start!!!

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I wake up as sun rays fall on my eyes disturbing my sleep... I look at the phone n saw the time

Raavi- rish  it's 8:30 !!!! (Almost screaming)

Rishita wake up with a jerk!!!

Rishita - what??? (Shock)

Raavi- ha dekh subha ke 8:30 ho raha hai!!!!

Rishita- today toh surely mom will scold.... Puja ka muhurat toh 10 baje ka tha na!!! (Fearfully)

Raavi - ha.... Chal jaldi ready ho ja!!! (Panicking)

I quickly got up n took my clothes n run to washroom!!!!

Raavi- mein jaldi nahaa leti hoon tab thak Tu bistar mila  le!!!!

Rishita - mein first nahati hoon na!!!

Raavi- Tu bohot time leti hai rish.... Ek kam kar tu guest room ka bathroom use karle.... Mein nahane ke baad bistar mila lungi!!! (Smiling)

Rishita - ya that's better

N then I went inside the bathroom while rishita took her clothes n went out

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As we reach the breakfast table we all everyone after their breakfast in peace

Wait a minutes.... Weren't they supposed to be panick right now.... Since we were already late... It was now 9 n it was going to take 1 hour to reach the mandir if there was no traffic!!!

Rishita n I look at each other confusingly

Kalyani - aa gaye tum log.... Aao aur aakar breakfast kar lo!!! (Sweetly)

I thought she was gonna scold us!!! 😬

We took our sit

Rishita - maa... Humein toh late ho gaye na toh puja cancel kar diya?? (Nervously)

Kalyani - nahi rishita... Actually muhurat 11 ka hai.... !!!! (Smiling)

Rishita - pad apne toh humein 10 kaka tha!!! (Confusingly)

Dhara - that's because humein pata tha ki tum log jaldi nahi utte wale nahi ho isliye 10 bola, so that tum log time ke according jaldi utho !!! (Laughing)

Everybody laugh

Rish n I look down with embarrassments

But wait yeh shiva , dev aur krish kaha hai!!!! 😬

Uncle , aunty, gombi n bhabhi were having their breakfast peacefully... N as I saw rishita ,she is also having her breakfast peacefully without any tension

Kya yeh log kuch plan kar rahe hai!!!! 🤨

Krish came running

Dhara - utt gaye dono??? (Curiously)

Krish - (taking his sit) ya finally.....dev ko uthana toh easy tha.... Par shiva kitna late utha woh.... Usse toh meine bola ki abhi 10 baj raha hai aur bhabhi bohot gussa ho gayi hai.... Tabhi utt kar nahane gaya hai..... Meine toh uska phone bhi le liya (showing the phone) so that woh time na dekh sake!!! (Laughing)

Gautam- sach mein kabhi kabhi toh lagta hai krish is more responsible than this two!!! (Hiting his forehead)

Krish - lagta kya hai mein hoon responsibility (making a pout)

We all chuckle

Ajj toh shiva ko heart attack hi aa jani hai !!!! 🤭

Raavi pov end

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Meanwhile

Shiva pov

Ajj toh paka bhabhi marne wali hai!!!

As I was going towards the hall, I was scared.... We were supposed to be in the mandir by now but because  of me the puja was cancel

Bhabhi bhot gussa hogi.... Par puja mere bina bhi toh kar sakte hai na... I mean dulha aur dulhan ko hi puja karni hai na... Toh mera waha pad hona ya na hona itna important kyu hai ki mere late utte pad puja hi cancel kar diya!!!

Dev - shiva kya kar raha hai??

Before I could hit with a table n fall down , dev hold my hand

Dev - dhyan kaha hai tera, agar lak jaati tho .... Aur kya soch raha hai?? (Concerned)

Shiva - yeh soch raha hoon ki tum logo ne mere liye puja kyu cancel kar diya.... Agar mein late bhi ho gaya tha tab bhi tum log ko jana chahiye tha mein aa jata na baad mein!!! (Irritatingly)

Dev - late ??? Puja cancel???kya bol raha hai??? (Confusingly)

Shiva - itna nakat kyu kar raha hai... Krish ne sab bata diya ki abhi 10 baj raha hai, aur puja bhi cancel hi gaya (Irritatingly)... BTW bhabhi bohot gussa hai kya?? (Tens)

Dev- oi budu abhi na 9 ho raha hai... Krish ne tujhe budu banaya hai.... Abhi bhi 1 hour hai....!!! (Smiling)

What???? My two brothers are really confusingly??? 😫

Then suddenly realisation hit me

Shiva - ya phir hum dono bewakoof ban gaye!!!

Dev - matlab??? (Confusingly)

Shiva - chal mere saath!!!

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As we reach the breakfast table, all were having their breakfast  peacefully

Shiva - oi krish tune mujhe jhoot bola na!!! (Irritatingly) ... Tujhe toh mein!!!!! (Frustrated)

Dhara - aur kya karte phir.... Pata tha ki tum dono late hi hone wale hoon... Isliye krish ko yeh sab bolne ko bola!!! (Chuckle)

Jarnadhan- chalo chalo... Tum dono bhi jaldi breakfast karo.... Humein jaana bhi hai!!!!

Dev - pad papa puja ka muhurat
...... (Uncle interrupted)

Jarnadhan -11 ka hai!!!

Then gombi told us everything.... Both dev n I look down feeling embarrassed!!!!

After that we all had our breakfast n left for mandir as we can affort to be late!!!

Shiva pov end

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Raavi pov

It was around 12 pm when the puja was completed.... We all took blessing... Uncle kept the wedding card in the temple , pandit ji blessed both rishita n dev ....

Jarnadhan - bacho tum sab yaha rukho hum pandit ji se baat karke aate hai!! (Smiling)

We nodded...

Uncle, aunty, gombi n bhabhi went to talk with pandit ji .... While we all wait for them outside the mandir...

We all were talking!!!

Shiva - mein abhi aata hoon!!!

Dev - kaha ja raha hai??? (Concerned)

Shiva - kahi nahi bass ase hi..... (Krish interrupted)

Krish - paka kisi ki pictures click karne ja raha hoga!!! Oi photographer kabhi toh rest le (Laughing)

Dev, rishita n krish chuckle

Shiva - agar agli baar se tease kiya na toh bhul jana ki mein kisi celebrity ki photo ya autograph tere liye le aaoga!!! (Threatening)

Krish face fall

Krish - mazak tha bhai... Thik hai agli baar se asa nahi karungi!!! (Awkwardly smiling)

Shiva - good!! (Sternly)

I chuckle looking at krish..

Shiva left!!!

Abb yeh ladka kaha ja raha hai!!! 🤨

I was going behind him but rishita hold my hand

Rishita - kaha ja rahi hai ???

Raavi - kahi nahi !!! (Nervously)

Then I had to stay there n listen to their talks!!!!

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Krish - yeh Shiva kaha reh gaya... Woh dekho sab log aa gaye!!! (Pointing at their direction)

We saw uncle, aunty, gombi n bhabhi coming..... I again turn around n was surprised  to see Shiva playing with the little children who were sitting in the mandir steps ....

A big smile appear on my lips when I saw him giving Chocolates to the kids... The kids too took the chocolates happily n were eating it with satisfaction ..... Shiva quickly capture the beautiful moments in the camera.... Really the kids were looking very cute while having the chocolates... The chocolates rubbed all over their cheeks ... This was the most beautiful moment that i witness after so long... Then I saw Shiva rubbing their cheeks with his handkerchief...

I was adorably staring him....Honestly he was looking very cute while doing that.... I quickly capture the moment in my phone... I really love this side of Shiva.... While people throw away this types of kids when they try to go near them, but here My Shiva was enjoying with this kids!!!

My???

Dhara - shiva kaha hai??? (Concerned)

Dev - pata nahi bol kar gaya tha ki jaldi aa jayega... Pad abhi thak nahi aaya!! (Worried)

I look at bhabhi

Raavi-  bhabhi Shiva waha pad hai!!! (Pointing towards him)

We all look at Shiva with an adorable smile

Dhara - mera Shiva hai ki asa....!!! (Proudly)

Gautam- sach mein he is a mam with golden heart!!! (Smiling)

Sach mein he is very good. !!! 😍

Jarnadhan - chale sab!!! (Smiling)

We nodded aur phir hum niche gaye!!!

Shiva look at us

Shiva - baat katam ho gayi??

Dhara - ha!!! (Smiling)

Shiva smile!!!!

Rishita - dad itni jaldi haveli jana zaroori hai???

Jarnadhan- matlab ??

Rishita - ghumne nahi ja sakte kya????

Kalyani - ghumne.... Lekin kyu abhi toh humne lunch bhi nahi kiya??

Gautam- it's k aunty.... Jane dijiye... Abb shadi ke rasam ke time toh hardly in logo ko kahi jane ko milega!! (Smiling)

Jarnadhan- ha gautam thik bol raha hai... Tum sab bacho ghumne jao... Hum directly haveli chalte hai!!! (Smiling)

Gautam - ha waise bhi dhara ko bhi aaram lena chahiye... Tum log jao!!! (Smiling)

Dev - pad app log akele??? (Concerned)

Dhara - dev hum chote bache nahi hai!!! (Laughing) ... Tum log jao aur enjoy karo.... K na!!! (Smiling)

Shiva- thik hai lekin agar koyi bhi emergency huwi toh humein call karna!!! (Concerned)

Krish - mein hoon na inke saath!!! Kuch nahi hoga (Proudly)

Gautam- Tu nahi jayega???

Krish - nahi mein bored ho jaunga..... Dev aur rishita bhabhi toh ek dusre mein hi busy ho jate hai (rishita n dev look at everyone shyly) aur Shiva aur raavi bhi ek dusre ko milte hi sab bhul jate hai (making a pout)

Both Shiva n I gasped

What is this guy talking about!!!! 😖

Krish - isliye mein bhi app logo ke saath hi jaunga!!!

Dhara- thik hai.....

Both Shiva n I were shock, n stood like statue

Krish kya bol raha tha ki mein aur Shiva ek dusre se milte hi sab bhul jate hai.... Sayad uski Aankhen karab ho gayi hai... Mein aur Shiva hardly baat karte hai!!!! 😒

Jarnadhan uncle gave us the key, n they took the other car....

We sit down on the car

Rishita n dev sat backside.... N Shiva n I on the front.... Rishita told that she will give the direction.... N told Shiva to drive!!!

Raavi- pov end

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Shiva pov

Finally we reach the place, actually it was deserts area.....

Dev - hum yaha kyu aaye hai??? (Confusingly)

I frown..... Dev is really an idiot , there are so many camel toh of course camel safari ke liye hi aaye honge!!!

Rishita - oi Mr budu.... Dikhai nahi de raha hai.... Hum log desert area mein  hai plus itne sare camels nahi dikh rahe kya.... Tum bhi na kya baat karte hoon!!!! (Irritatingly)

Dev was still looking confused

Raavi - hum camel safari karne wale hai!!! (Smiling)

Dev - oo!!!!

Then rishita took us with her.... But before that i lock the car 

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We all were enjoying the ride.... All of us were riding in one one camel!!!

Rishita n dev camel were closed... While my n raavi!!!!

We were enjoying the ride.... K this was something new because I  never did a camel safari l!!!

Rishita - maza aa raha hai na??? (Excitingly)

Raavi - bohot zyada!!! (Excitingly)

I was feeling pity for krish.... If he get to know this... He is surely gonna regret it

Shiva pov end

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Raavi pov

While riding the camel.... I saw dev and rishita were talking... Plus they were far away from us....

So this is the perfect time to talk with Shiva!!!!!

Raavi- shiva ek baat puchu??? (Nervously)

Shiva turn to look at me

Shiva - pucho na!!!

Raavi- tumne bache pasand hai???

From the moment I saw with the kids this question was running in my mind !! 😬

Shiva stare at me for 10 seconds before answering

Shiva - of course... Bache kisi pasand nahi hai!!! (Smiling)

Raavi- nahi I mean meine tumhe mandir mein woh bacho ke saath..... (Nervously)

Shiva - oo woh.... Ha mujhe bache bohot pasand hai specially those types of kids... I mean jinke parents nahi hote, they had to work in such a small age to earn their bread... Sach kaho na toh unko dekhkar dil toot jata hai... Really they are facing a lot of things in such a small age!!!! (Emotional)

I look at him with wide eyes

Shiva- mujhe na unke liye kuch karna hai... Ase bacho ko achi zindagi dena chahta hoon.... They also deserve the love and care that every child is getting.... This is not the time for them  to work, instead this is the time for them to study.... But circumstances ke karan woh asa nahi kar sakte!!!! I so wish I could do something for them!! (Emotional)

This is definitely not the Shiva I knew 6 years ago.... That Shiva was insensitive, immature,  impulsive but this Shiva.... This Shiva is responsible, mature... He has really grown alot!!!
N all this changes were healthy and so I was really happy for him

Raavi- par tum toh unke liye itna kar rahe hoon....

Shiva look at me with wide eyes

Raavi - I mean sorry but bhabhi ne mujhe bataya ki tum charity work karte hoon, ase donations karte hoon.. Phir... (Curiously)

Shiva- ha par phir bhi.... I don't know pad jab ase bacho ko dekhta hoon dil dukhta hai... I mean adults toh kam karte hai lekin yeh bache... In bacho ko itni choti umar mein kam karke dekh dard hota hai!!! (Emotional)

Shiva was really becoming emotional.. I can't see tears in his eyes... So I divert the topic

Raavi- waise dev ki shadi ke liye special planing ki hai?? (Excitingly)

Shiva - ha ki na hai.... Mein soch raha hoon ki ek special pre wedding shoot rakho... I mean ajj kal yahi trend chal raha hai... Rishita bhi khush ho jayegi!!! (Smiling)

Raavi- ha theek kaha!!! (Smiling)

Shiva- waise tum kya karne wali ho??
(Excitingly)

Raavi- bohot kuch.... Soch rahi hoon sangeet mein ek special dance performance de do!!! (Smiling)

Shiva - wow!!!!! Very nice !!! (Smiling)

Shivi - waise ek aur surprise hai!!! (Together)

Both of us look at each other n chuckle

Raavi - surprise??? Kya surprise?? (Excitingly)

Shiva - yeh toh surprise hai... Bata nahi sakta!!! (Smiling)

Raavi- woh bhi hai!!! (Laughing)

Then we enjoy the ride talking and laughing....

It was indeed a very special moment

Raavi pov end

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Shiva pov

It was 4 pm when we reach the haveli... But we all were shock to see our friends ..... Nikhil, samuel, malini, and riya were waiting for us in the gate!!!!

We all got the biggest shock!!!!

Rishita - guys!!!! (Excitingly shouting)

Then we run towards them

Rishita - tum log kab aaye?? (Excitingly)

Riya - around 1pm .... Tum log kaha gaye teh kitna wait kiya humne???

Rishita - sorry sorry ghumne gaye teh (smiling)

Then we hug everyone n were walking

Nikhil - finally man.... Mil hi gaya celebrity !!!!(hugging me)

Shiva - (breaking the hug) chup idiot.... Tu bhi toh aa sakta tha na milne ke liye!!!

Nikhil - waise kaisa hai tu??? (Happily)

Shiva - bohot acha aur tu??? (Happily)

Nikhil - mein bhi.... Abb dono dost mil gaye na bohot maza karenge !!! (Excitingly)

Shiva - sure!!! (Smiling)

While I was talking with samuel... I saw raavi and nikhil hugging...

There was a strange feeling in my heart

Yeh dono??? Kab??? Kaise???Don't they hate each other????

Nikhil- kaisi hai raavi?? (Smiling)

Raavi - (breaking the hug) bohot achi aur tu??? (Smiling)

Nikhil - mein bhi acha hoon.... Meine tujhe bohot miss kiya!!!

Raavi- meine tujhe bohot se bohot zyada miss kiya!!!! (Smiling)

Then raavi hug nikhil again....

Seeing them like this something broke inside me..... Probably my heart

Shiva pov end

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That's it  the end

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K so till now raavi has suffer alot... I mean she has cry alot for Shiva... Now it time for Shiva..

We all take others love for granted but when that other person shower their love on others, we realised their value... That same will happen with Shiva.... How will he reacted when we will witness that the place which he hold in raavi's life 6 years ago is now taken my nikhil.... Will he realised his feeling????

Get ready for jealousy kam Shiva ka realisation parts in upcoming chapters

~Priya Pariyaar

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