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Mansi - Let's go..

They all went outside from back door of IB, may be because there is media on front door..

Mansi & Akhilesh sit in one and moved, Jatin & Arshiya in another car and move.

Maya & Shreya in one car, followed by Abhir & Zain in another car, followed by Bomb Squad Van..

Maya Guided the location and Shreya was driving.. In about 20 min. they reached the location (this Scene run in 40x speed, mean on screen within 30sec. they reached at their destination)
But Shreya stopped the Car, about 100m away from the destination so that the goons can't catch them..

Shreya took drone from backseat and fit Spyglass camera to see the things more clearly in dark night. Maya connected Camera of drone with laptop so that footage can be seen there. Maya took the remote control of drone in her hand.
Shreya took her hand outside the window of car and Maya operate the drone and it flied in sky. Shreya took laptop from Maya and started observing the footage keenly.
In a minute, after observing everything, she instruct Maya to call back the drone and she did the same.
In 4 to 5 second, it came back and Shreya again put it on back seat.

After thinking something for a while, she spoke..

Shreya - So guys, Yha bahar charo taraf kul 9 log hai or as per live, andar 3. To total 12 log hai jinse hmari fight hai.
Hmare pas ab sirf 20 minutes bche hai.. so here is the plan!!
Mei or Maya main gate ki taraf se attak krenge or Tum dono peeche ki taraf se 🧐
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Galti ki koi gunjaish nhi.. andar walo ko ye nhi pta chalna chahiye ki hm bahar hai, wrna wo bachho ko kuch bhi kr sakte hai🤨
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Or mei Jammer bhi on kr rhi hu, jisse unka internet connection tut jayega or live bnd ho jayega, pr hmara connection bhi tut jayega isiliye mei n kisi ko instructions de paungi n koi mujhe contact kr payega.. So be very careful 🧐😄
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So! carry the extra bullets, put your silencer on (on this, Shreya and Maya both put the silencer on their guns) and Let's Go!! (She switched on jammer before coming out of car)

On this, all the 4 officers came out from both the cars at the same time and move in, as per Shreya's instructions, Maya & Shreya from front and..
Abhir and Zain from back.

(Imp - We are only seeing movement of Shreya and Maya on screen)

From slow steps both of them reached near that area where all the students were hostaged by terrorist.
They already knew where the terrorist were located as they knew their positions from footage of drone..

(Let me give you some gilms of area where students were hostaged..
So There is boundary of almost 10 feet with the gap of gate, but no gate, on front side. Then inside, there is house of 20x20, just made up of bricks, no paint, nothing. There is no floor at all. Just a tarrace stand on four pillars.
There were 5 goons on tarrace, then at bottom 2 were on front side and 2 on back side.
Then inside house, main gate was locked from inside. As per live there is big hall and one room type thing inside, may be washroom. Then in corner there are stairs connected with the tarrace. Other than that there is only big hall where students are hostaged, and 3 goons were walking in order to have eye on students. Every goons too wore mask to hide the identity) like this 👇👇

Now..
Shreya and Maya enter from the front side and started firing, didn't gave any time to anyone to think what happened just.
Before they can conclude and react, Maya and Shreya killed the 5 goons there..
2 were on entry gate of the room, where the students were hostaged and 3 were on tarrace.
3 who were on tarrace, as shooted, fallen down from tarrace with the noise of thud.
As soon as they fallen, Maya and Shreya both run and stands on the eaither side of entry gate like this 👇

With the noise of thud, One of the goon open the gate and came out. He didn't realize the presence of Shreya and Maya.
As soon as he came out, Shreya grab him by putting her hand on his mouth and drag him far from gate.. Before he rebel, she hit him on his head from back of her gun and he fainted.
Again she went and stand on either side of gate on same positions. Maya peeps inside to check what's the position of other two goons..
Other two goons' back are facing gate so they went inside and hide behind two different pillars..
Children saw them as they all are facing gate, so at the time of entering Shreya did gesture of keep silent by putting her finger on her mouth..
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Shreya also did some gestures to Maya and Maya said Yes by eyes.

ACP Pradyuman - Very Proud of you Shreya, you know how to communicate with your team by gestures when you can't talk!!🙂

Both goons turned back but unaware from the presence of Maya and Shreya..
They Started walking.. as soon as they came near piller both the cops came out and pointed gun and said..

"You are under Arrest" 👮‍♀️

.. to be continue