Characters: I really enjoy them. Personality wise I don't really relate to the main character, but Argus is very interesting. 

Cover: It feels cluttered and some of the text is hard to see. But I like how you made the eye of providence the "A" in All.

Plot: I love it. It's very intriguing. If I was more of a reading on my own without this book, I'd definitely give it a read!

Writing: There were some SPELLING mistakes.... Very sorry for that pun. But they were easy mistakes that anyone could make. Like an extra letter or missing letter in a word, not that big of a deal. 

Extra Thoughts: I recommend this story. If you're a fan of Harry Potter you'll defintly love it and if you're not, you'll still love and if you're like me, a fan who has only seen the last two movies, you'll love it! 

Overall: 8/10

@CrazyHairDay all I ask is that if you haven't done already, add my book "Stay with Me" to your reading list <3