"Avada Kedevra!" Lucy yelled at her pencil. It automatically started floating towards her.

There are two things wrong with this paragraphic, so hold on to your seatbelts because I'm gonna rant.

First of all, Avada Kedevra is the killing curse, not a levitation spell. You are supposed to say "Accio" or even "Wingardium Leviosa". So please, use the correct spell when writing a HP fanfic.

Second of all, they use quills and parchment/paper, not pencils. Yes, they do sometimes call it paper, put they never call quills pencils. Its wrong.

Hogwarts is actually in Scotland, just so you know....