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In Parakram SAF,

All were present in common hall.

Col.Batra:What have you done Shergill?I gave you all rights but that doesn't mean you can do such thing.You didn't even listen to Faizi,when he said to not do it.What happened to your Karan.

Karan:Sorry sir .

Col.Batra:Your sorry doesnt make anything better here .Don't be silent I want an answer from you.

"ANSWER THO USKO DENA HI CHAHIYE"came a female voice.

Everyone turned to see the person and all the officers were hell shocked to see that person there .

Col.Batra: Lieutenant General Neelima Mahajan!!
Mam you are here?What's the matter mam.

Yes she is army doctor , lieutenant general and first female commando who has trained more than 18,000 cadets in last 20 years.

(I know indian army still doesn't have any female commandos but there is this wonder woman Seema Rao who is India's first female Commando trainer.So I'm taking inspiration of her in this character with adding some more masala,because it's a story🤪).

All the agents and col.Batra :Jai hind mam.

Neelima:Jai hind!

Neelima:So Mr .Batra kya ho raha hai apke academy mein.Punishment ke naam pe yaha harrasment ho rahi hai!

Sid(coming in):Exactly Aunty G!!

Neelima:Sid!

Sid just went and hugged her tightly and started crying .

Neelima:Sid,kya hua?Kyun ro rahe ho?

Sid:Aunty woh monu.

Neelima:Usse kuch nahi hoga .....don't cry .

Arav:Yes Sid bro ,nothing will happen to her .We are there right?

Sid:Hmm .....I hope so.

Col.Batra:Sorry to interrupt but what's your relationship with Monami.

Neelima:Well I should have said this before but I couldn't.Remember I called the day before all the recruits joined?

Col.Batra:Yaa....and you told that one girl with name Monami will come ,accept or reject her but don't ask her about her surname ,identity or family background.

Neelima:Yes..... that's because she didn't want to get any type attention by revealing her identity.Because she wants to achieve this by her own name not with her surname.

Col.Batra:Who is she Neelima ji?

Neelima:Dr.Monami Mahajan,one of the successful young doctor in the world.Late .Major.Juhi Mahajan ki beti and mera bhi beti hai.Mein uska step mother hoon but rishtey mein tho mein uska real mother jaisi hoon.And also JM Hospitals ka one and only heir.

And shock will be an understatement for everyone present there.

All:What?!

Col.Batra:Kya?Monami Juhi ki beti hai?

Neelima:Haa sir.

Just then the dispensary doctor called Batra sir.

Doctor:Hello sir please come to the dispensary immediately.

Col.Batra:Is everything fine?

Doctor:No, you please come here immediately.

He cutted the call and looked at Neelima.

Neelima:Kya hua?

Col.Batra:Doctor call hai, dispensary ko immediately ane ke liye kaha.I think something is wrong.

Arav: Then let's go!!

Everyone rushed towards the dispensary.And they saw doctor standing outside the room .

Col.Batra:Doctor what's the matter?And why did you close this room.

Dr:Sir ,woh Monami ko hosh aya hai,but I think she is mentally not stable.She is not allowing me to touch her and she even removed all drips attached to her and she also threw everything in the room towards when I tried to go close to her.She just now became quite.I was scared so I closed the door until you come.Sorry but she is going insane,I can clearly see she is nut in her sense .

Arav:Damn it!!!!!Jho humne nahi chaha wahi hau hai!!

Sid:Shit!!!Ahhhh(he shouted in frustration).

Neelima:It's ok now we are here,come lets go inside.

Everyone slowly went inside the room just to see a heart piercing visual there.
There is Monami sitting in a corner all scared ,messy,shivering,crying to which her eyes became red and breathing heavily.

Everyone hearts pained seeing her like that.Mostly Karan's because he was the reason for her condition.

Neelima:Monu!!!Mera bacha!!!

Monami:Maa!!Woh....woh...

Neelima:Everything is fine bacha ...come with me .

He took her to bed and signalled doctor to give her injection.Monami sensed doctor coming near her so she threw a glass which was placed on the table beside her on to doctor.

Monami:Pass mat aana !!!

Neelima:Monu woh tumhe medicine de rahi hai bacha.

Monami:I don't want .......I won't only my medicines ,mere pass katam ho gaye hai  bejne ke liye kaha tha par abhi tak nahi aye.Bring them for me from our hospital.Please maa I need it .

Neeliam:Ok Arav will go and bring for you,but till then these injections.

Monami:NO!!!!DONT YOU DARE!!

Neelima:Ok ok....calm down .

Neelima signalled Arav ,sid to hold her.
They came and hold her tightly ,she was shouting but still they had to.Meanwhipe doctor gave her a sleeping injection.She slowly drifted into sleep.

All this while everyone were seeing monu with tear eyes.They were feeling bad for her.As for Karan only one thing going inside him GUILTY.For Karan after his brother's death this the only thing that pained him.

Doctor:Kal subha tak isse hosh nahi ayegi,but uske utne ke baat pata nahi kya hoga.Ok I'll leave now.Please Call me if you want any help.

Neelima:Sure doctor .

Doctor left from there.

Neelima:Mr .Batra please come with me.I need to talk you about something.

Col.Batra:Yes sure.

They both left from there.

All others were still outside the room.

Premji:Kabhi nahi socha tha Monami ko aisa dekhunga.

Koel:Mujhe uske saath rehna chahiye tha.

Bala:Doctor madam jaldi Teekh hojayagi na?

Sumanji:Sumanji ko aaj tak kabhi Ithna dukh nahi hua jitna aaj hua.Monami bahut achi hai uske sath acha hi hoga,sumanji ko patha hai.

Chitra:Haa mujhe bhi bahut bura feel hua #sad.

Faizi:Mujhe toh kuch bhi samaj nahi araha hai.

Sanju:Haa sirji,bas Monami jaldi Teekh hogo .

Karan:She will be fine.

Sid:Fine?!! Are you serious Mr.KARAN SHERGILL!!

Karan:I know sid you are angry with me right now.Im really sorry.

Sid:Who the hell needs your Blady sorry!!You are such a....

And he went and gave Karan a hard punch on his face and Karan started bleeding due to the hard blow .Sid held Karan's collar.

Sid:I will kill you today for what you did to monu!!

Karan was just standing there without saying thing,because he felt he deserves it. Arav and others were pulling sid back.

Arav:Sid bro stop it yaar!!

Sid: I can't !!!I just can't control my anger.

Arav:What do you think I'm not angry on him for what he did with di.But this is not the right thing.Please for me calm down please .

Sid calm down  a bit.

Sid:Kabhi socha nahi ek army officer jo sab ka jaan protect kartha hai woh Ithna hertless ho sakta hai.

Sanju:Sid tum Karan sirji ko galat samajro ho.

Sid:Tum baat mat kare...tum tho uski chamchi ho... uske support mein hi baat karogi.

Sanju:Aisa nahi hai...

Sid:Aisa hi hai.Karan se kabhi umeed nahi tha.But I thought atleast you will understand.But I was wrong tum bhi uni ki tarha hertless ho.

Faizi:Sid...

Sid:Faizi bro.....you are the only agent I trust here,your the only one with a heart.But tumhare baat ko koi value nahi detha.Aap cha kar bhi kuch nahi karpayengi .We both are quite same bro .

By saying this he left along with Arav and other recruits.Other agents also left from there.Ustaji and dilbaghji who was leaving,stopped for a minute.

Ustaji:Karan sir,aaj tak mein ap ke har baat mane hai,har cheez mein ap ke saath the.Lekin iss bahr nahi.Ap iss bhar galat kiye hai.

Dilbagh ji:Ab toh badal jao beta.

And they left from there .

Faizi:Isliye hum kaha,sochne keliye.Lekin nahi janab tho sunna bhi nahi chahta.Waise bhi mera koi value nahi hai tumhare life mein

Karn:Faizi aisa nahi hai.

Faizi:Baat mat karna mujhse (and he left from there angrily).

Sanju:Kash hum iss baar apke saath nahi diye hothe .Pata nahi mera akal kaha gayi.Hum dono ki galat hai sirji,jo bhi saza apko hogo woh hume bhi hogo.

Karan:Nahi sanju iss mein tumhara koyi galti nahi hai .Tum sirf mera orders follow kiya hai.

Sanju:Lekin sirji...

Karan:Please tum bhi jao apne room mein.Mujhe aaj ekala chodo..please.

Sanju:Ji sirji (she also left from there).

Karan just sat there down resting onto the room door.He don't know when but tears started flowing from his eyes, uncontrollably.He drifted into sleep slowly,while still crying.

So that's it for today.

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