Abhir is My Kid, Am I Right?

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Starts after the six year leap. Abhimanyu already met Abhir and Akshara in Sharma house. Abhinav doesn't know about Abhimanyu's real identity nor Akshara's. Manjari don't hate Akshara nor Arohi. Here there are many elements that are different from that of the serial track. Keep an open mind and read it as considering a piece of fiction. Abhimanyu's day to return back to udaipur is arrived. He is getting ready to go back.

Abhimanyu announced his departure to Abhinav and Abhir. Akshara don't have any change in her expression. But to her surprise her kid is so sad to part himself from his docman whom he met days before. Abhir rushed to the embrace of Abhimanyu.

Abhir: I don't know why... But I really want you to be with us forever. I liked your company alot. Docman you are like a superhero

Abhimanyu: but I don't belong to this world of yours junior. This world consists of you mumma and your papa. So let me go beta. Thats

Why you don't belong to our world, doc man why can't you stay with us?

Akshu: because he is not like us betu. And he have his own family to take care of. His own world. For whom he can sacrifice anyone or any bonding. And also there is a reason why mumma too can't let him stay with us( she murmured to herself)

Abhimanyu looked at her understanding what she really meant by that statement the one who can sacrifice anything for his family. Yes she is right. He didn't give her a chance and later whatever he did won't compensate for his reckless behaviour on that particular day.

Without listening to anyone he grabbed him into the house. Abhimanyu was forced to come in. He greeted her and she too

Reciprocated it with emotionless face. There is a serenity in her approach to him, no sadness,no happiness not even a bit of anger. She is treating him like he don't affect her anymore. Abhir climbed to his hand

Abhir: take your seat doc man.You can go later, now come and sit with me. Once you go back I won't get this chance to be with my super hero naa

They took the seat. Abhi held his hand to hold his attention.

Abhi: Am not your superhero beta. Your parents are, you papa Abhinav ji is your superhero. Every kid's superhero is there father. Don't give such a big title to someone else who actually don't deserve that.* His voice trembled a bit*

Abhir quickly bring a glass of

water for his doc man. He don't know why he this attached to Abhimanyu. Abhinav who don't know that's his identity and relation to Akshara and Abhir enjoyed the warm moments between them

After spending five or ten minutes he announced his departure.

Abhinav: it's rare to meet people like you who is talented, humble and also from a big family. In this world were little fortune make people go mad, people like you have everything still know how to be down to earth is rare. Your mindset to treat the poor over well off people show how good you are at your heart.

In excitement Akshara blurted out

He is always like this. Years before he once prefer a poor kid over the minister's doctor....

Abhinav: but how do you know about that Akshara ji... Do you guys know each other before?

Abhimanyu: I offended the ministry so it becomes a headline in those time. May be she read that somewhere. I.... Am not that good like you think.

Abhinav:  no way from the way you behave, it's evident that you are too good. Your wife and family is lucky to have you. Especially your kids.

Akshara just stare at Abhi emotionless.

Abhimanyu: the people you worship won't be same in their real life.  Only when you look at it from close, you will see the cracks that appeared in your idols. I failed to be good at many places that demands my presence and support... Am leaving... It's getting late for the 🛫

He comes out. Akshara had an expression of sadness for the first time after ages. Abhi make sure that they are alone. He turned to her.

Abhimanyu: take a deep breath. I know my presence is suffocating you for ages and also i know that Abhir is my blood. I saw his school dairy accidentally. Don't worry .... I won't fight for his custody.... I .... I don't deserve such luxury in this life.  Am guilty for so many things. My presence won't be good for him . He deserves a papa like Abhinav ji

Akshu: .. Abhimanyu... I know..
It's wrong to hide this fact from you and you also have the legal right to be with him .... But you don't deserve my kid. When we two were desparately waiting for your support...
You left us alone ... So in this moment you don't deserve to be with us or our happiness.

Abhimanyu:  please pursue your career as a singer. Don't spoil your talent. You are so talented Akshara ji...

Mrs Sharma, that's how people call me here, and I want you to remember this identity of mine forever...

Abhimanyu: as you wish Akshara. As your heart wants.

After that they came back near

Abhinav and Abhir. Abhinav left to pick his taxi 🚕.

Abhir: will you miss me DocMan. You don't naa??

Abhimanyu: I will miss you alot junior. Remember this forever, you got a best family. Never hurt your mumma or papa for anything.  Love you alot baccha. Be like this forever and ever.

Abhir hugged him and turned to his mumma's side.

We too will miss him naa mumma. You too tell him bye bye 👋🏻

To make the kid happy, Akshara bid bye to him..

Abhimanyu came near Abhir as he asked him to lower to his height

Can you pick me up... You are doc man naa you have muscle naa.. so do that for me...please 🥺

Without wasting time he did what abhir requested to him.. only Abhimanyu know how happy he is to have this moment. Even Akshara felt a lone happiness deep inside her heart to see them together this happy.

Abhinav bring the car. Abhimanyu walk towards it. When he is about to enter, he turned back and see her retreating image.

Akshara pov 🦋

Abhimanyu Birla, time changed us alot... Alot means alot. And there are so many things that can't be mend by the passage of the time. Like the broken heart and trust. It won't be like earlier and still today, you don't want you stay beside..
You accept your mistake and ready to leave without trying to mend our relationship. You didn't ask me about Abhinav and my relationship. You believed what you wanted to.

In otherside

No Akshu, I lost even the right to stand before you. Then how can I ask you how you and Abhinav ji are related to each other... How you guys met. How he was this okay to be the father of my son

His thoughts were broken by Abhinav's comment.

Abhinav: I saw your daughter's picture. She is just like a doll
You are so lucky to have a princess like her

Abhi wiped his tears way without Abhinav's notice

She is my brother's kid. Not mine. But more like my own. She calls me poppy and she is my roo. I am not blessed like others. My own karma snatched everything from me.

Abhinav dropped him in the airport.

After hours of journey Abhimanyu reached his
Home. Without wasting time he left to his room and locked himself.

You are alive and safe ! That's what matters to me Akshu, I don't deserve you. I failed you thousand times. I don't deserve

Second chance. I deserve this cold hearted treatment of yours. My son... Abhimanyu's Son Abhir .  But I don't deserve to have him in my life. That day I lost everything with you. And don't worry....I won't disturb your life, even though I am here breaking every passing moment.

To be continued 💝

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