Title: The Nerd who hated love.
Author : I_Dxnt_Even_Knxw
Cover: I don't know the exact feeling I got when I saw your cover. One part of me was thinking, it's definitely good. The other part was like it's way too simple.
What I actually think is that while it is good, it can be much better.
If you are going for an original book cover, you can make it a bit mature.
Title: Your title may give the cliche vibe, but it is definitely not a turn off.
Description : Your description was spot-on. It didn't give away too much and definitely makes anyone who wants to read your book want to know more.
Plot: It isn't something I have not heard or read before, but what makes it unique is that yours has a twist to it. Good job;-)
CHAPTERS ASSESSMENT
SENTENCE CONSTRUCTION
Your sentence construction was good. So grammar was not a turn-off in your book, and that is definitely a really good thing.
PLOT HOLES
I really hate this stuff, so I was glad when I didn't see it in your book. There was nothing I felt should have been said or done that wasn't there.
RELATABLE CHARACTERS
Your characters were a hundred percent relatable. Erin as a shy person was really portrayed well. The thing of being calm when you're totally freaking out on the inside happens to me all the time. I can totally relate with Erin.
Since Ethan's character hasn't been much in the spotlight, I can definitely say Erin is my all-time favorite character.
OVERALL ASSESSMENT
I can definitely say your book was a good read and I really enjoyed your book. You have something good going on there.
WILL I KEEP READING?
Definitely!
I'll give your book a 4.8/5.
I wish you success on your writing journey. Hope you become a published author soon!
Hope this review helped?
Love, Emma
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