This review is for KPOP_CLUB_97
Before we start, I just want to say that this book was so nostalgic for me and brought back so many childhood memories which I enjoyed.
Now let's start off with the title this time, at first I didn't think much of it but when I started reading your short story, the title related to the story a lot for me, it may not for others but it definitely did for me.
Moving onto the cover, I don't have much to say about it since it relates to the story and it's well-designed.
Finally, the chapters, do I even need to say how nostalgic they were for me? It was so very similar to what I watched in my childhood and brought me memories of the 24 hours or 3am challenges I used to watch.
There are no grammatical error which I could find so good job on that! But one small error is that the, for instance you've used the word "mummy" which should always be separated by a comma from the sentence, for example:
"Let me tell you, mummy."
Overall, "Lifestyle of America" is a nostalgic, short and sweet book! I don't have too much to say about it since it's a short story so I do apologize for the shorter review.
Thank you for submitting your book! Do let me know if you have any further questions!
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