Let's get right into this! Twigpaw, she is just so dumb. I'm sorry but she isn't the smartest cookie.

So first she thinks 'OH MY STARCLAN THE CLAN HATES ME!' even though it seems like the clan freaking loves her but no. Twigpaw is a bit like Hollyleaf in a sense wanting the high rank in the clan to feel important.

I get that when she was telling Alderpaw she wants to be a medicine cat just like him when she was a kit but come on! There are 3 medicine cats! That's more than the average clan!

Also what is up with her saying 'loyalty forever!' to her sister then literally' the next second be like 'oh uh I meant that in a sisterly way, not that I don't like you I just like my clan better than you'

I also just wanted to point out don't go saying 'WRONG, YOU ARE WRONG DUSKY' Because Twigpaw is still young and yes I need to rant about her so I'm going extra hard on her.

Moving on, I get Twigpaw loves her mother even though she never remembers meeting her but seriously she needs to have faced the reality that the mother is gone and learn to love who is taking care of her right now.

Heck, she could be in Violetpaw's place with a horrible caretaker who is mean. But whatever right? I feel like maybe the Erins could have maybe made her a bit less of a copy then Alderpaw.

Now they do have their differences but they are really similar to. To name a few, they both want to be liked and fit into the clan, they both work really hard yet still manage to fail in simple things, and when they do something right they are still fretful about it.

They are a little bit different but still.

That's my rant on Twigpaw I am actually going to move onto a few other things that may not entirely have to do with this book, so if you don't want to here my thanks then just go and comment down below the next cat I should do.

Alright now that those people are gone let's move on to what I want to say. First order of business. I will be going through the entire book and editing it, chunking it into paragraphs and even revising a few of my statements so look forward to that.

Also, I have actually posted a few new books since I have last updated this book. Life With Dusky is a book where you can keep up with my life (not that you would want to but if you do) and a serious story called Bucket Of Colors. Just keep reading the next part is important.

Next, I would love to thank every single one of you who read, comment, and vote on this book. It makes me so happy to see how many people are liking my rants and how many people who are hating on them (I block those people if they leave unconstructive criticism) so if you are blocked by me you know why.

I really want to give something back to you guys but I am not sure what. If you guys want something like a Q and A at the end of one of my chapters or I can start doing interviews on people who read this book and ask them a series of questions regarding the book's manner. If you have any ideas let me know.

Last thing I swear, I am very sorry for the lack of updates in this book. Life has kept me full and it has been really hard with all the homework plus swimming everyday. I promise I will try and update this book a bit more frequently.

So again comment down below the next cat I should do and this is Dusky signing off