These will NOT BE KIND REVIEWS. I'm here to help you improve your story, not make you feel good. If you want a review, you're  trying to improve. I will critique:

Grammar (if necessary)

Prologues (if there is one)

Every single chapter separately

Every single character separately

An overall critique

Anything else I see necessary 

And it will be harsh and mean, I'm not here to compliment you. More info on the next chapter.