Bold letters are mind voice

I'm really sryyyyyy I know was so late and sry again as I just read my character sketch and understood it had alotzzzz of word errors, name error and spelling errors. I'm really sry for ur inconvenience it's just becoz of hurry. And promise u to be careful from now.
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House is shown and all are seen running here and there.

Lady 1: oh they will come anytime but nothing is ready!😟 my god ( tension)

Lady 2: oh sharadha bhabhi pls calm down. Almost all the preparations are ready. And more over no outsiders are coming bhabhi just our children arriving.

Sharadha: shakshi but u know na. Our children's are coming after full 3 years na. Then how can I be calm

(Just then phone rings and sharadha attends it)

Sha: hello.... Beta

Opp: haan maa .... I'm really sry ma

Sha:what happened y r u saying sry na beta.... ( Calmly)

Opp: maaaa..... My flyyy..my flight...... Got cancelled due to worst weather so maaa....

Sha: (interupts) oh ok that means you will not come even today... Na....  Just pls cut the call MR. Lakshya Maheshwari pls get settled adopt a family and change ur name also ..... Forget us be happy with ur family... ( Speaks continuously)

Lak: maaa.... What can I do ma if weather is bad.... Then u have to scold weather not ur innocent son......

Sha: do whatever and don't talk to me ( cuts the call)

Shakshi: baas.. baas bhabhi take some breath na

Sha: see na again another excuse. I'm really fed up of these excuses ( in verge of crying)

Neil comes. So sharadha wipes her tears

Neil: what happened Didi .

Sha: no Neil nothing it seem weather is bad so laksh can't come even today.

Neil: what......

(Doorbell rings and sharadha goes to open the door)

At door

Shakshi opens the door but before could realise anything someone hugged her tight and shouts

Someone: maaaaaaaaaaaaamiiiii...... I missed u soooo muchhhh maaamiii

Sharadha, Neil and even Suresh comes hearing the shout comes there

Neil: out of the world ( smiles). Hey even we all are present.

Sur: jeeviiii leave her na... Let her breath....  (Yeah it's jeevitha)

Sha: u howww

Just someone enters hugs sharadha

That person: likeeeeee thissss

Sha: move awayyy. lakshhh

(Yeah it's our laksh. And he is not in the mood to leave her. But now a girl enters and goes near Suresh)

Sur: babyyyyyyyyy

Girl: darlingggggg I missed u so muchhhhhh

Sur: me tooo

(Another man enters and looks whole scene as something happening weirdly)

Neil: am I invisible here or really I'm not present here.( Murmurs but audible)

All leave their respective hugging persons

Girl: awww papaaaaa I love and hugs Neil (yeah it's ragu)

Neil: I missedddd u alottttttt( with tears brimming)

Ragu: awww papa I'm hereee na now

(All admires and smiles but that person didn't change is expression)

Jeevi: y are looking us like this viren

Viren: just make a call after finishing ur dramas ok

Jeevi: viren what happened!!!

Viren: asking meee. Just say one thing. Ragu and lucky are leaving 3 yrs away from us so they miss family this much. But madam u just went 1 week before and u are the one who made this as hug day. ( Shakes head disbeliefly)

Jeevi: how meannnn u know na I can't even stay  atleast 1 day from my family. But I stayed away from all  for 1 week.

(Viren tries to speak something but Neil interupts)

Neil: shut up not a word against my angel. Ok come we can move in

Everyone are seen sitting together

Shak: laksh u said that ur flight cancelled na. And how come all together

Lak: just for fun!!!to surprise uuu all ......

Sha: very worst surprise....

Jeevi: haan everything becoz of ur fav laksh only

Lak: didiiii not fair....

Jeevi: what not fairrrr. Idiot

Lak: shut up.....

Sur: laksh mind ur words. She's elder. Give respect to her ( sternly)

Lak: but she only called me idiot first na

Sur: as I told u she's is elder so u have to obey and respect her ok

Shak: oh Bhai pls enough just now he came and u started ur class. It's just siblings ri8s to fi8 with each other. And u both!! started now itself . Pls say ur storiess na

Jeevi: wooh mami. We both landed here at crt time only . But something cooked in laksh mind so he just convinced us to his prank and  we both were waiting for viren and ragu for 1 hour so that we all can come together and surprise u all....

All: whatttt ........ For an hour

Ragu: but u all say me one thing y u all send bhaiya to US and bhabi to UK

Sha: becoz I thought u both forgot how board in flight and that's y sent viren to bring u back and jeevi to bring laksh back

Ragu: what are u saying Mami I said that "I will be back for sure within this month" na. 🤨🤨🤨

Shak: really ragini we all are waiting to see u both for past 3 yrs. And u both gave us very worst reasons u know.
( Worried)

Rag: what can we do ma. It's all fate

Lak: it's all fate.

( Both raglak stare each other and turns their face before anyone's notice)

Lak: okkk leave we came na.  Now let's enjoy

Sha: we missed u both

(Laksh remembers something and laughs )

Sha: what happened laksh( confused)

Lak: maaa really ur out of the world what u said adopt a family and live there ( mimics her)

(After spending some time together sharadha leaves to arrange the breakfast. Ragini, jeevitha,viren leaves to get fresh up. As Neil didn't talk properly with laksh,laksh goes near him. But he move away saying imp call. Laksh face falls dull which is not gone unnoticed by Suresh and shakshi)

Suresh: mistake is mine but punishment for laksh

(Shakshi goes behind Neil)

Shak: pls no more

Neil: what... What I did

Shak: I know it's not Soo imp call ri8 ( gives a fake smile)

Neil: no shakshi I thought it's from our new client

Shak: Neil don't forget I'm Mrs. Neil. I know something is going on with u, ragu, laksh. But u three are hiding from us. ( Neil interupts)

Neil: our children's are grown now!!!!

Shak: I know but what's the need to say it now??? ( Confused)

Neil: and they don't need any bedtime stories now

Shak: ( irritated) pls come to the point

Neil: becoz u are trying to create a story by making, me, ragu and lucky as. Characters I think. It's nothing between us I'm just normal with laksh ok. ( Leaves to their room)

Shak: Neil u can hide now but Truth will be out one-day. Just hoping it should not affect our family happiness ( leaves to dinning hall to help sharadha)

At virika

Viren: wowwwwww u made it as hug day today

Jee: u already gave same comment. U r complaining me for hugging very bad. Do u know how much I missed all( pouts)

Viren: At airport ur lovely brother made me away from u as though I'm ur secret lover and didn't even let me say atleast hi to u. And u!!!! I saw how much enjoyment u had na while seeing at my state. U know I misseddddddd u alotzzzzzz ( hugs her from back)

Viren: and u gave hug to all but not for handsome hubby. Poor me

Jeevi:awwwwwwwww ok sry but see na how protective my brother is naaa... And hubby ok who's that handsome...

Viren: uuuuuuuu

Jeevi: meeeeeeee

Viren:je......... ( Get interupt by sharadha call)

(Sharadha calls all to have their breakfast )

(All had their breakfast. Suresh and Neil went as they have meeting. Others are spending time together  But raglak didn't speak to each other. Time was running it's dinner time even Neil and Suresh arrived but both didn't even look to the other ones direction.

But one thing is clear from their eyes that how desperately waiting to talk with each other but ............)
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Pls ingnore my mistake and grammatical errors. Pls give ur valuable comments and let me know about my story. Byeeee