Contest entry for Brightflame365

"Foxpaw!" My mentor called for me loudly. "Coming!" I yowl." Are you ready for your first gathering?" My Mentor says. "Yes!" I say loud and clearly."Ok then Foxpaw, Just listen to you mentor."my Leader  says scaring me,before heading to get the other warriors and apprentices.I eat a mouse before we leave."All cats coming to the gathering follow me!" My leader exclaims loudly.All of the warriors and apprentices follow Her into the forest, before we come to a clearing with Four Broken trees. She gives the signal before we race into the clearing."Foxpaw?" My brother says catching up to me."Yes?"I say."Are you scared?"He says."There is no need to be scared Lynxpaw."I say."Oh,Ok!"He says following his friends. There sat the other leaders and the warriors,Too."Hello!"A small Tortoiseshell she-cat says."I am HoneyPaw,Apprentice of ShadeClan!"She says batting at me with her paws playfully."I am Foxpaw! I am from CreekClan."I say ,Before a burly tom walks up to us."HoneyPaw!"He growls clearly annoyed." Bye,Foxpaw." She says walking behind her mentor."So how is it going?"My mentor says scaring my fur off."Good!" I say."Ok!" He says,Before a yowl cuts him off."Let the gathering begin!"A black and white She-Cat yowls."Ok,SnowStar,Would you like to begin?"A Ginger Tom says nodding his head to the she-cat."The prey in CreekClan Is running well.We also have two New apprentices. FoxPaw and Lynxpaw."She says Before everyone began to yowl my name and Lynxpaw's name to the sky."Alright PaleStar would you like to go next?"SnowStar says."Yes,We have plenty of prey in ShadeClan.And one new apprentice with us tonight, Honeypaw!"She says, before howling her name to the sky."HoneyPaw"I yowl loudly."Ok,FeatherStar,would you like to go first?"PaleStar says."Yes the prey in GeodeClan is running well,and we have a new deputy,ReedClaw."She says a hint of sadness in her voice." Ok , Swiftsta...Where is she?"She asks confused."She has fallen ill."QuailSong says."Oh,ok?"PaleStar says."Prey in SageClan is running well!Meeting dismissed!"QuailSong yowls before everyone leaves.