1/Hello everybody, I'm super_bongbong. There are four people in my family: my father, my mother, my sister and me. My father is a doctor. He is fifty years old. He is a very kind person and I love him very much. My mother is a physical education teacher. She is fourty years old. Like my father she is very kind and I love her very much. My younger sister is a student in class 1B. She is very mischievous but she is very intelligent. I love my family so much and I always hope all members in my family healthy.

2/Hi, everybody! My full name is Dang Khanh Mam. And now ,i want to introduce about my daily routine. we start? ok .yes thanks

my daily routine begins at six o'clock . I get up and brush my teeth ,wash my face at 6'15. Then i go to bathroom.Can you guess what will i do ? ofcourse ,i take my shower. After that, I have breakfast with my family at half past 6. I have a light breakfast with bread and egg(After that, I have a light breakfast with bread and egg with my family) Then I leave home, oh, before leaving home I say Good Bye (to) my parents and I go to school by bike. My fisrt class starts at 7 o'clock. After school, I go home at 10 o'clock but some time(S) I stay late to read E Book, comic in library. Then, I play batsketball with my brother and my cousin, Cuong and Hung. I have dinner with my family. I watch TV with them or I go out with my friend. I go to bed at ten o'clock.

My evening finishes. What a pity? It 's too late. See you again. I love you very much

3/ Hi! Everybody! I'm My and This is my family

Do you want to know about them? Sure, I'm talking about my family right now. My family has three people: My father, My mother and me.

This is my father.His name is Thach. He is a heat(l)thy person. He is thirty five and he works as a manager . He loves his family and his job. My father can play archery and he has a trophy. He likes the habour. He loves my mother very much

This is my mother. My mother is 32, her name is Nga and she works as a counter. She is very nice and I love her very much . She has a good job, a good daughter ()and a good man. She can speak English. She likes orange juice, fruit, and vegetables but she doesn't like celery. She is a vegetarian. She is the best woman. She is very good at math. I am proud of my mother

Now, I tell you about my self. I'm a beautiful person . I'm a student. I am twelve. I love English but I'm not good at English.I love my family, my friend and Dethi.com very much. I study at LVT secondary school. I have a trophy of swim. I love the sea but I hate tornado.

3/ Uhmm, các mod nhà mình chăm chút được quá, đồng ý về điểm chác hết nghén !!!!

Nhưng có góp ý nè, mình sẽ nêu ra luôn lỗi sai + chữa cho bạn luôn , được hén ? Minh nghĩ thế sẽ cụ thể hơn ( cho dù mất nhiều time của mod, hok biết các mod có ca thán hok ???...)

VD Minh chữa luôn 1 số câu nè nhé :

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Nguyên văn bởi phantrunghieu

hello my name is hieu.there are four peoples=> cái chỗ này nên làm rõ nghĩa : there are four people in my family:my father,my mother,my sister and me.My father is 38 years old.he is a dotor.My mother is 35 years old.she is a teacher.she works in junior high school.my sister is 6 years old.she is a student she very intelligent but she brazen because I scord her.AND me is 13 years old=> I am 13 years pld.I'm in class 7b3, nguyen nghiem school, quang ngai city( câu này thêm dấu "," hén ).I love my family very much.

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Nguyên văn bởi Sharpay My

Hi! Everybody! I'm My and This is my family

Do you want to know about them? Sure, I'm talking about my family right now. My family has three people: My father, My mother and me.

This is my father.His name is Thach. He is a heatthy person. He is thirty five and he works as a manager . He loves his family and his job. My father can play archery and he has a trophy. He likes the habour. He loves my mother very much

This is my mother. My mother is 32, her name is Nga and she works as a counter. She is very nice and I love her very much . She has a good job, a good daughter and a good man. She can speak English. She likes orange juice, fruit, and vegetables but she doesn't like celery. She is a vegetarian. She is the best woman. She is very good at math. I am proud of my mother

Now, I tell you about my self. I'm a beautiful person . I'm a student. I am twelve. I love English but I'm not good at English(hic,thế này mà hihihuhu bảo là tự khen mình nhiều ó ?.I love my family, my friend and Dethi.com very much. I study at LVT secondary school. I have a trophy of swim. I love the sea but I hate tornado.

Oh, by the way, I talk so long

Bye Bye, see you again and nice to meet you

Ờ, bài này thì mod My nhà mình đáng khen ( không phải vì là mod đâu nhé, My mới học lớp 6 thôi đó), Các mem ơi, cố gắng lên, vượt mod đi nào!!

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Nguyên văn bởi ahemahem

Hi, everybody! My full name is Dang Khanh Mam. And now ,i want to introduce about my daily routine. we start? ok .yes thanks

my daily routine begins at six o'clock . I get up and brush my teeth ,wash my face at 6'15. Then i go to bathroom.Can you guess what will i do ? ofcourse ,i take my shower. After that, I have breakfast with my family at half past 6. I have a light breakfast with bread and egg. Then I leave home, oh, before leaving home I say Good Bye my parents and I go to school by bike. My fisrt class starts at 7 o'clock. After school, I go home at 10 o'clock but some time I stay late to read E Book, comic in library. Then, I play batsketball with my brother and my cousin, Cuong and Hung. I have dinner with my family. I watch TV with them or I go out with my friend. I go to bed at ten o'clock.

My evening finishes. What a pity? It 's too late. See you again. I love you very much

=> Bài này bạn làm tương đối tốt ó, chỉ có điều, Minh cảm giác bạn chưa nói về Gia Đình mình ó ??? Chú ý chủ đề lần sau bạn ó !!! Còn nếu đây là đề : " kể về 1 ngày làm việc của bạn" thì rất tốt . Cố gắng hén !!!

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Nguyên văn bởi Trân_hnt_207

Hello everybody !!. Let me introduce about my family. My parent are teachers and they are staying Tien Giang provice. I have two sisters and two brothes. All of them are living and working in Ho Chi Minh city. At the end, there is me. I'm also living here and a student. Although now my family don't live to gether, we often keep in touch by mial or cell phone. Especailly, every month we have still come back our home town. I love may family

=> Bài này bạn đã có Sha My chữa roài, thanks Sha My cái

uhmm, Minh ý kiến vậy thôi,các bạn cố gắng hén !!!

4/ Nguyên văn bởi Luckya

HI everyone! I'm a newmenchỗ này , mình nghĩ là "new mem"chứ nhỉ?. I hope I can improve my English at=>in here. Let me introduce my familỵ My family has four people: My father, My mother, my younger sister and me. My father is agood man. He always takes care of his family with a large love=> mình hiểu ý của bạn, nhưng large, theo mình biết thì chỉ dùng với địa điểm thôi, nhỉ?mình nghĩ là có thể dùng great. He is a businessman. He works hard in company to make me and my younger sister have a good life. He likes red music and always sings it every morning, It's a cheer for me daily. Because when I hear him tobỏ to nha bạn sing, I feel happy and love my family very much. But sometime, he works too far fromwhere we live. At thatthose time , I remember chỗ này phải là miss mới đúnghim so much.

My mother is anaccountant. She is 37. I amalways proud of her because she 's very nice. She cooks very delicous. She 's nice, too. Don't need I say=> I don't have to say , thì rõ nghĩa hơn, You can know what=> how I love them. She is a woman whoPhải là whom chứ I can share anything. She always advices me goodthings and make me feel comfortable after busy lessons at school. My younger sister is 13. She learns at secondary school. She is lovely. Finally, That is me. I think I 'm a simple girl. I think my English isvery bad. I don't have special trophy. l hope I can become friend of many people at inhere. Love all !!

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