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Raavi inspite of Shiva's continuous pleading didn't tell about her insecurities & feelings to him . Shiva gets a call from the wholesale market & he has to leave for that so he offers Raavi to drop Pandya Niwas & then Go to his work. Raavi obliges to him.

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Shiva is driving his bike & Raavi is shown keeping her one hand on his shoulder and one on the side stand of bike , maintaining a safe distance from him. Shiva from the rare view mirror was continuously looking Raavi .

Raavi's mind was once again occupied by all the thoughts happening to her since a few days & then today's incident. "Shiva apne sabse personal space , apne ped ke paas mujhe leke gaya, mujhse baat karne ke liye , pan meine uski ek bhi baat nhi maani. Pan Shiva muhe apne ped ke paas hi kyun leke gaya?? woh toh uska personal space hai?? waha woh kabhi kisi ko nhi le jaata. Gaumbi ko bhi bachpan mein kitna dhundhna para tha tab jaake Shiva ko iss ped ke paas dekha unhone. Fir mujhe kyun??

Shiva could clearly decode from her curious expression that again she was thinking or most probably Overthinking something. "Apne mattar jaise dimaag ko tu kitna chalati hai ??"
Raavi didn't respond.
"Sunn rahi hai chipkali!!" Shiva said in a loud tone.. Raavi flinched by the sudden intrusion & held his waist tightly.
She calmed down her breathing & said "Kya Shiva aise achaanak se chilaake dara diya tune mujhe" Raavi said still calming her pacing heart rate.

 "Dekh yaha pe koi film nhi chal rhi hai.. Reality hai isiliye , Jab bike chalate hai na.. toh saamne wale ki baat peeche wale ko sunai nhi deti hai! toh zor se bolna padta hai..." Shiva said in a loud tone so that Raavi could hear him "gadhedi" (in a murmur)

"Haa haa samjhi mein" Raavi answered. "Waise kya bol raha tha tu?" She further asked him .

"Bol nhi puch raha tha ki ab apne dimaag mein kya leke beith gyi?? kuch puchna tha mujhse??" Raavi gave him a 'how did you know' look and said "tujhe kaise pata chala ki mujhe tujhse kuch puchna tha??"

"Bhagwaan ne na chipkali ka pati banaya hai mujhe, ab bachpan se uski shakal padhne ki aadat de di hai mujhe" Shiva replied with a sheepish smile .

 "Haa waise... ab ... woh ped" Raavi fumbled "Haa woh ped kya??Aam ka ped hai, bachpan se wahi jaata rehta hu, Kyun tujhe woh jagah achi nhi lagi?" Shiva asked genuinely.

"Nahi Shiva aisa nhi hai , woh mere puchne ka matlab tha.. woh ped toh tera personal space haina.. bachpan mein bhi woh school wale kaand ke baad tu wahi gaya tha na, aur aaj tak kisi ko lekar bhi nhi gaya, toh..." Raavi hesitated to further question but
"Kyunki tu mera hissa hai, meri Ardhaangini....iss Shiva ki shakti hai. Jo mera hai woh tera hi toh hai... isiliye tere mere beech kuch personal nhi hai" Shiva added the last line with a hope in his heart that now maybe she will share her issues with him. "Chal ghar aa gya, ab utar yaa aise hi chipki rahegi" Shiva huffed in fake annoyance.

Raavi's eyes became teary after hearing his small answer but a very huge confession. He considers her such an intimate part of his life to share his most prized possession with her also.. She literally jumped off the bike & hugged him tightly.

"Ayye chipkali, tune firse apne aankhon ka nal chaalu kar diya.. ab chod mujhe 'Jaane de' " He showed annoyance but hugged her more tightly. 

"Tu mujhse itna kyun pyaar karta hai Shiva (sobs) Mein itna pyaar deserve nhi karti" she added further sobbing. "Shhh! " placing his finger on her lips "Aaj bol diya, dubara mat bolna" he glared at her and further said, "Tu har maayne mein meri patni hai, Mann, dil, tann... Aur tune hi mujhe kaha tha na mein tujhe deserve karta hun" She nooded ...." toh phir tu apni baat se mukarkar yeh kehna chahti hai ki mein Somnaath ki sabse Sundar ladki ko pyaar karna deserve nhi karta?"

"Nhi Shiva aisa nhi hai" she immediately denied. "Par tu toh yahi keh rahi thi na" He asked her...

"Mera matlab tha ki, meine kaunse ache karam kiya honge ki mujhe tu mila." she answered him with love in her eyes.
"Simple, pichle janam mein meri sevaa ki hogi, Bhagwaan ke saamne roz Shiva Jaap karti hogi tabhi toh tujhe The Shiva Pandya mila" Shiva boosted and did his collar up. 

"Hogya apne muh miya , mitthu banna" Raavi chuckled at his antics & Shiva genuinely smiled silently, sending prayers to Baba Somnath to always keep his Sunshine bloom with happiness & he also promised to be always her Sunshine protector.

"Ab aise hi ghurta rahega, Deri nhi ho rahi hai mandi jaane ke liye" Raavi asked with one brow up ... Shiva came out of his biwi ko Taadna session and placed a kiss on her forehead , waved her bye & drove back for the wholesale market.

Raavi also went inside Pandya Niwas.., Little did they know that there was one person who was watching all the affairs of ShiVi peeping.

"Hayye Mhara bhogilal, oh bhaiii , yeh Raksas meri phool si bacchi ko kaise galle lagaya, maatha chum ke chala gya, Cheee!! , ayye meri phool si bacchi jo tel masale ki badboo bardasht nhi kar sakti thi, kaise uss Jungli se chipakna pad raha hai usse... Ayye pan mein na apni dikri ko kisi bhi tarah iss Raksas Siva ke changul se ne chuda ke rahungi...

(while joining her both hands in a prayer & staring above the open sky) "Hayye Bhogilal Mharaj ikle, meine apki param bhakt hun ne, toh aap thoda is bhakt ki prarthna sunlo... Kaise bhi karke apni phool si Raavi ko phir se apne isaare mein ne, laana parega... Yeh Raavi toh haath se nikalte Jaa rhi hai. Ohh bhai.. agar meine nhi roka ne, toh jald hi meri phool si bacchi ko yeh Raksas apne bacchon ki maa bana dega, aur ne mujhe mere Naati , naatin ka chehra tak naseeb nhi hoga bhai.. Ayye Prafulla kuch soch bhai kuch soch. Bhogilal Raavi ko waapis laane ka Raasta dikha do bas......."

"Fui aap yaha kya kar rhi ho?? woh bhi Pandya niwas ke saamne.. arrey jaldi chalo agar Shiva ne dekh liya na toh" Anita gets a flashback of Shiva cutting her 'Dayan waali chotti'
"chalo jaldi, Shiva ke haathon marne ka risk nhi le sakti mein" Anita started dragging Prafulla... 

"Ayye bhai ruk ne Anita, mein toh apni phool si bacchi se Apni Raavi se milne aayi hun" Prafulla said in her extra sugar coated tone. "Sab samajh mein aa rha hai Mujhe Fui, Chup chaap Chalo" Anita dragged Prafulla and made her sit in a Auto . 

"Oh bhai, meri Baat sunn ne Anita" Prafulla pleaded. "Fui Chupp!!
Bhaiya aap Somnath sagar road ke taraf le lijiye" Anita told the driver their destination... "Ayye bhai.. Itne dur kyunn jaana hai... Aye nhi tum Main road hi lo" Prafulla protested...

"Bhaiyaa inki baat mat sunno, Umar ho gyi hai dimaag mein kabhi kabhi ho jaata hai... ab aap toh samajh hi rahe ho na , Chalo Fui hum waha se Mandir fir Somnath beach jaayenge" Anita said "Ji maddam Chalta hun " The driver obliged

"Ayyye Anita... Maaf Nhi karungi mein tujhe!! dekh lena" Prafulla glared at Anita pointing her finger towards Anita. "Theek hai Fui mat maaf karna, waise bhi aapse Maafi maang kaun Raha hai"

"Ayye Anita......." The Auto drove off.

Meanwhile in Pandya Niwas ; As soon as Raavi entered She found the entire Hall and the house to be dark . "Yeh Pure Ghar mein Andhera Kaisa hai??" She looked here & there to know the cause of the Power cut and found the Main Switch to be Off. "Yeh MCB kisne Gira di hai... woh bhi dono phase ki! Koi nhi mein on Kar deti hun."

And on the other side it was shown our Dev babu very carelessly holding the Naked live wire instead of holding the insulator part. Also a scorpion was just on the wall were Dev was resting his hand holding The live wire .

(A/N : being a science student & a responsible citizen , I hereby request You all never ever try to pull this type of KKK stunts at home. Warna Shock lagne ke Baad jitne volt ka current nhi maara hoga usse zyaada zor ki chappal maaregi Mummy, {agar survive kar gye toh, matlab agar 220V ka hi current flow kar raha hoga wires mein toh!} aur Papa bhi Maarenge belt se, Toh SAAVDHAAN RAHIYE SATARK RAHIYE. *Issued in public interest , Janhit Mein Jaari*)



As soon as Raavi pulled up the switch of both the MCB's current started flowing and since it takes a fraction of seconds for current to flow through all the live wires , that thing only happened and Dev got a slight shock , making him to fall down from the stool where he was standing . He yelped in pain and everybody in the house got alert. Rishita who was resting on her DESI AC ran towards her room, Raavi too followed... Gautam & Dhara also come from Pata nhi kaha se(show mein nhi dikhaya tha par aagye).

"Tu theek hai na Dev tujhe kahi chot toh nhi lagi na, aise kaise gir gaya tu?" Dhara asked cupping Dev's cheek. "Bhai kya kar raha tha jo aise Gira para hua mila?" Gautam too asked.

"Sabse pehle mujhe yeh batao ki kis Pagal ne Main switch on kar diya, Mein yaha AC theek karwaa raha tha, wires pakad ke Rakhe the.. Jhatka Laga aur gir Gaya mein" Dev asked to nobody in particular.

As soon as Raavi realised that once again because of her Bad luck Dev got hurt. Tears started forming in her eyes. "Sab meri Galti hai Dev, Sab meri Galti hai! Mujhe Maaf kardo, mein Itni badi panauti hoon na, mujhe pata Nhi tha in sab ke Baare mein aur meine hi switch on kar diya" saying the last line the dam of Raavi's tears broke down..

"Whattt Raavi??? Are you insane or crazy??" Rishita yelled at Raavi , "Pehle toh yeh Rone band karo...Tumhare sorry bolne se baat badal nhi jaayegi na ,ki agar tumne switch on nhi kiya hota toh Mere Dev ko shock nhi lagta" Rishita added.

"Haa Rishita tum bilkul sahi keh Rahi ho, Galti meri hai , mere Panauti hone ki hai" Raavi futher sobbed.. "I dont care Tum panauti ho Ya nhi ho Par irresponsible , careless aur Shiva kya bolta hai hmmm Haa Dobi! woh toh zarur ho" Rishita angrily yelled at Raavi .

"Rishita shaant hoja, tere Bacche ke liye yeh sahi nhi hai itna gussa.. Raavi ki baat maanle woh maafi maang rahi haina, Tu stress mat le" Dhara poked her nose.

"Haa Rishita, Bhabhi Sahi keh Rahi hai, tum beitho aaram se Aur stress mat lo" Dev said "Aur Raavi tum bhi please next time se careful rehna."

Raavi hunged her head low and was about to leave the room when She noticed the scorpion on the sill of the window where Rishita was sitting with a chair & the scorpion was approaching towards Rishita . She shouted "Rishita waha se hatto " and pulled Rishita from the chair.

At that time only everyone noticed the scorpion on the sill which made its way out from the window .

"Dev, sc..scorpion, beechu tha...Kaat leta toh" Rishita started sobbing while hugging Dev. Dhara pulled Rishita from Dev and Hugged her, she started caressing Rishita's Baby bump while Gautam was patting Dev's back. Raavi stood there all shockingly. Was she so unlucky that this happened.

Raavi ran from the room and locked herself in her & Shiva's Room. She sat on the floor with support of the Bed and started crying & cursing her fate. "kyun, kyun, kyun !!" She even slapped herself sometimes. After a few seconds Dhara called her "Raavi mein Rishita ke pairon ki maalish kar rhi hun, Rishita ke liye soup bana la."

Raavi harshly wiped her tear traces and tried to say in a normal voice "Aay..Aayi Dhara di".

Raavi went to the kitchen, cut the vegetables but still every time she wiped the tears they came back making her eyes filled. Raavi's throat was drying so she went near the filter to get some water but was feeling quite weak to walk. She took some steps but found the world revolving...Everything suddenly went blank & Thuddd!!

One time the Aangan was shown where Rishita was asking "Yeh Raavi ko kya hua?? itna time kyun laga rhi hai?" "Haa Rishita mujhe bhi nhi samajh aa raha aise toh kabhi nhi karti hai Raavi" Dhara answered. "Pata nhi kya kar rahi, hum yahi rehte hai, teri maalish baaki hai na, abhi woh zyaada zaruri hai."

Rishita hummed in response.

On the other side Raavi was shown unconsciously lying on the floor.

Aage kya hone waala hai ANY GUESSES???

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