Part 01

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People who want english translation... I have provided a summary in english for you people so no need to fret...

So lets begin....
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Avni: Pagal ladki itna kyun kho jati hai apne Neil ki yaad mae... Aa jayenge wo tere liye, sirf kuch din aur... Uske baad mere Neil mere paas honge...
Waise bhi Ishq ka gehra hone ke liye toh yeh judai ka rang ghulna zaroori hai na... Kitni haseen hogi na humari zindagi,apky rang mili hui...
Bas ab aap U.S se fatafat aajayen, aapki yaad mae din ba din mazeed bawli hui jaa rahi hai yeh Avni Neil Khanna...

Sanvi: Abey oyyye itni bhi kya jaldi ho rahi hai tujhe... abhi se unka naam bhi jod diya hai apne naam ke saath.. Pehle shaadi toh hojaane de...

Avni: Ho jayegi bhaee ho jayegi... Neil Khanna Avni Mehta se hi shaadi karega...

Sanvi: Ishq ka izhar tak toh kia nhi hai ghunchoo ny.... Shaadi karne chali hai...
Mai toh yeh soch rahi hun ki tumhare bache bhi dekhne milenge ya nahi, ya phir isi trh sharamate sharmate puri jawani guzar do gi aur phir budhape mae hayye re hayye re, hayye re hayye re karna kyun k phir in sb ka koi fayda nhi hota hai...
Dekh le re tu apne pyar ka izhar jald se jald kar... warna pata chala ki chiriyya chug gayi khet aur humari chirraiyya ho gayyi late...

A: Kidhar se uth kar aayi ho tum aaj.. Behki behki baatein kar rhi ho,talli walli toh nhi ho??

Sanvi: Hey bhagwan yeh aisa kaisa betuka ilzam laga diya hai tumne humpar... Humari maaji na..humme urakar phenk dengi aur phir hum seedha tumhare sar par aakar giren gey...
Mazak ke ilawa Avnii, tumhara Neil gaya hai U.S. Aur tujhe pata hai ki wo jagah bomb banane mae bht achi hai,chahe wo atomb bomb ho ya chalti phirti ladki bomb ho. Kahin tumhara neil haath se na nikal jaaye...

A: Bachpan se wo humara haath tham kar chala hai... Humarey isharon par nacha hai.. Humara bandar ab bhi aisa hi hoga,pura vishwas hai humme uspar....
Aur yeh humara yakeen hai ki neil avni ko chodkar kisi ka bhi nhi ho sakta hai...

Sanvi: neil par tumhe vishwas hai par waha ki un atomb bombs ka kya... Kisi nae phasa daala jiju ko toh..

A: Unko mae ussi bomb se ura dungi agar mere neil k aas paas bhi bhatki toh...

Sanvi: Dekh le bhaee.. Teri marzi hai,jo jee chahe kar... Lekin baad mae mat bolna ki maine kuch na bola ya agah nhi kiya tujhe...

A: Haan na meri pyari sanu tum fikar mat karro.. kyuki neil sirf apni avni ka hai.. Aur kisi ki taraf wo aankhein utha kar bhi nhi dekhenge... kyuki unko pata hai k aisa hua to mae unky baal kaat daalun gi... Jaise ek bar bachpan mae kia tha..

Mere rang mae rangne waali
Pari ho ya pariyon ki rani...

Sanvi: Phone baj raha hai maharani ji utha lijiye... Kaun hai waise??

Avni: Tere jiju...

Sanvi: Ahaaan..., matlab mujhe bahar phekne ki saazish rachi jaa rahi hai... chalo tumhari manokamna puri hui,mai jaati hun ab ghar late ho raha hai... Waise bhi pura din yahin parhi rehti hun.. Ab raat mae bhi nhi gyi na toh meri ghar par no entry ho jayegi ...

Avnii: Ohkay byee jaanu...

Sanvi: Chal bye,aur haan jiju se baat krte time thoda kam sharmana...

Avnii: Sanu ki bachi.. nikal...

And Sanvi ran away....
Avni picked up the phone and brought it near her ears....

Avni: Hello...

Neil: Avni.. aap hi hai na??

Avni: Humara phone hai toh hum hi uthaenge na... pagle...

Neil - bawlii... aapko miss kar rahe hen hum... 6 saal ho gye mulakat hue...

Avnii: Haan na,lekin hum aaj bhi bawli aur aap pagle ho... Jald se jald waapas aayen ab aap,humse intezar nhi ho raha...

Neil: Toh meri bawli yeh sunkar khush ho jao, k mai 1 hafte mae waapis laut raha hun...

Avni (excitedly): Sachi???

Neil-: Haann re...

Avni : Lekin mujhe ajeeb lag raha hai.. Itne saal baad hum aapko kaise face karenge... Humein sharam aarahi hai, aur phir humne itne din baat bhi nhi karri.. Wo toh sirf pichle kuch time se aap touch mae hen...

Neil: Bawli maate... Mai laut rha hun na, phir mai aapka aur aap meri... Acha haan rakhne se pehle mai aapko ek baat batana chahunga...
Ya phir chodiye,milkar bataunga... Aapka reaction chahiye mujhe... I am sure aap yeh baat sunkar bht khush aur surprise dono hi ho jaengi...

Avni: Yeh bhi koi matlab bana bhala... Suspense pehle bana daala aur baat ek hafte baad... Ab hum raat mae so nhi payenge...

Neil: Toh mat so na...

Avni: Hum koi ullu hen jo na soe... Aur agar nhi soye toh kya achar daalen... Hum sone ja rahe hai,ab rakhiye...

Neil: Haan na meri maa acha ek aur baat, mere sapne dekhna... Good night...

Call disconnected....

Avni ( to herself): Aapke sapne hi toh dekhte hen... Aur kya manga humme apni zindagi se... Sirf aap chahiye,jo ki hummein maloom hai ki sirf iss bawli ke hen. Bs 1 hafta phir aap humari bahon mae..,mera matlab tha hum aapki bahon mae.... Jee toh chahta hai ki phirse aapke kandhe par latak jaee jaise bachpan mae latka karte thay... Aap kaise dikhte honge?? Tasweerein bhi nhi bheji apny apni.. Mana ki yeh aapke baba ka qasoor hai k unho ny humara number nahi diya apko taaky aap man laga kr prhai kar sakken... Aapki kamiyabi ki baat thi isliey humne yeh seh liya warna toh wahen aapke pas urr kar aajate...

And mumbling to herself she soon fell asleep....

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Summary

Avni can be seen missing her childhood friend and Love Neil... She speaks as to how the colour of separation is also important to make their life perfect... She tells her friend that how much does she love neil... Sanvi agrees to it but also warns her saying that her neil has gone to U.S and what if he got trapped in some other girls love... avni asks her to stop worrying as her neil is only her's... She had full faith that he will never betray her and if he did she would cut off his hair the same way she had done in childhood ... But Sanvi continues and asks her to atleast confess about her feelings and love before it becomes too late... But Sanvis words made no affect on a blinded avni ... Who tells her that she need not worry about it....
Avnis phone rings... The person calling is none other than neil....
Who asks avni about her well being and also reveals to her that he will be returning to India in a week... And that he wanted to tell her something which he would tell only on meeting and that it was a surprise for her.... She blames him for creating such suspences and stealing away her sleep... Before disconnecting he asks her to dream about him...
After the call ends... avni thinks how she keeps on dreaming about him only day and night... He was the only thing she demands from life and also reminisces her childhood memories... How she used hang on his back... And finally lost in his thoughts she entered her dreamland....


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