Sky is my frickin bean. She is so fucking amazing.
You had no spelling errors as far as I could tell, so yay!!!
You were a little short on conventions, like when one of the girls is asking Sky what she likes to do it says "So Sky,..."
It technically should be:
"So, Sky,...."
Other than the few missed commas, you did really really good.
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