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A bunglow is shown...it's night time...Three girls and Two boys were standing there...they all were looking towards the main door of the house.....

Divya-Are u ready guys....

Dev and Krish-yes....

Rishita-Go....

Dev-nhi yaar.. Nhi hoga humse......

Divya-kyu ....kya hua abb...

Krish-pehli baat Aunty hum dono ko pehchanti h....

Rishita-isliye hi toh tumhe suit pehnaya h....and I am damn sure aunty nhi pehchan payegi tumhe...

Dev-Rish yeh bhout risky h...aur isski halat dekhi h tune...puri talli h....

They all looks towards behind....there Raavi was talking with herself....she was fully drunken....
She was not able to walk properly....Dev and Krish hold her...

Raavi-ehh chlo na andar chlte h....(drunken)

Divya-Kaise Raavi...teri mumma gate mein khadi hogi dande lekar hme pitne ke liye.....

Raavi-mummy vo kon...accha Vo haa yaad aaya...(drunken)

She sleeps On dev's shoulder.... .

Divya-guys abb kuch nhi jo sakta..tum dono ko jana hi padega....go...

Dev and Krish look at each other....both covers himself with duppatas and holds Raavi.....

Both goes inside and rings the bell....
Prafulla opens the door and gets shocked..

Prafulla-Raavi....
Dev(in girls tone)-namaste Aunty ji....

Prafulla-isko kya hua h...?

Krish(in girl's tone)-Vo aunty padte padte so gyi thi isliye hum chodne aa gye....

Prafulla-ohh....

Dev(in girl's tone)-aunty hum Raavi ko room tak chod de...

Prafulla-haa chlo...

Both enters and start going towards her room...

Prafulla-ruko....

They both gets scared and turns....
Dev(in girl's tone)-ji aunty....

Prafulla-tum dono ko kaise pata ki uska room upar h...

Krish(in girl's tone)-vo aunty....
hum....hume Raavi ne hi bataya tha ki uska room upar h...

Prafulla-oh ok....vaise tum dono ka nam kya h....

Dev (in mind)-abb kya bataye....

Krish(in girl's tone)-Krishi....aur iska Devi....

Prafulla-yeh kaisa nam h....

Dev (in girl's tone)-aunty aisa hi h....

Prafulla-accha thik h tum dono use room me chod do....

Krish (in girl's tone)-ji aunty....

Both goes to her room and makes her sleep.....

Dev-Raavi tere liye pata nhi kya kya karna padega....

Krish Covers her with blanket .... .

Krish-sote wakt itni cute lag rhi h....par jaise hi uthegi pura Mumbai hila deti h...

Dev-chl abb chlte h.....

Both leaves ....
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Its a bright new morning..... A big mansion is shown... Sun rays peeps through the window and falls on a sleeping man.

*** ummmm... Dev... Plzzz let me sleep.. Why do u come to wake me up and disturb my sleep......."

The man is none other than SHIVA. Shiva Pandya. A handsome hunk, the heart throb of his last college, every girl's dream boy. But at present he was dreaming of his dream girl which was disturbed by his one and only best friend Dev.

Dev a innocent and charming boy. For him the world means Raavi, Rishita Divya Krish and his best friend Shiva.
He is an orphan.....Shiva and He lives together from childhood they are best friends....But For his studies he comes to Mumbai....and Shiva lives at Somnath...

After 2 years...Shiva comes Mumbai to continue his studies with Dev.....

Dev snatches the blanket from Shiva. Shiva wakes up and sits down making a cute face. Dev smiles seeing him.

Shiva-tune kasam khayi hui h ki tu mujhe sone nhi dega.....

Dev-gadhe jaldi uth aaj tera pehla din h college mein.....

Shiva-tu mujhe isliye jaldi bula rha h...mujhe laga kuch aur bolne walla h...

Dev-oyee jayada drama mat kar mujhe pata h tujhe kya sunna h...

Shiva-toh bol na...
Dev opens his hands and shouts..
Dev-Happy Birthday Kutte.....

Shiva hugs him......
Shiva-tu konsa kutta nhi h.....

Both laughs....

Dev-Chl abb jaldi ready hokar hall room me aaja....

Shiva nods....

After sometime shiva gets ready in casuals....he was looking damn hot....
He takes his neccesary things and goes to hall room..

It was fully dark...
Shiva-abee Bandar tune Light kyu off kiya hua h...

All lights gets on.....
The whole room was decorated beautifully..with ballons..
Shiva was very happy with the surprise..

Shiva-yeh sab tune kiya h...
Dev-nhi ghar me aur bhi h na koi...

He smiles.....
Shiva-Thanks yaar....it really means a lot to me...

Dev-agar tera bhasan ho gya ho toh cake cut kare.

Shiva cuts the cake and feeds him...both hug each other.....

Dev-Happy birthday bhai...hamesha khush rahiyo...

Both smiles and leaves for the college....
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At Car....Dev was driving.....
Shiva's pov...

I know dev jitna bhi frank hone ki koshish kare Tu bhout masoom sa h...aur mujhse bhout pyaar karta h...

I am very lucky ki mujhe tu mila....agar tu nhi hota toh mera kuch nhi hota...

Mai jaanta hu tu bhout emotional h aaj kyuki aaj teri mom ka bhi birthday h...
But tu mere liye khush rehne ki acting kar rha h.....

Tu sach me anokha h.....I love u Dev....tu bhout kimti h mere liye....

Shiva's pov ends...

Dev stops the car...
Shiva-kya hua...

Dev-hum phoch gye h....

Shiva looks outside.....there was a big building Everyone was roaming there...

Dev-tu yhi pe wait kar...mai car park karke ata hu...

Shiva-okay....

Dev left....
Shiva was admiring the college....he was feeling very good today....

As shiva was crossing the road. A car with full speed comes...He looks towards the car and was rooted in his place...He immediately close his eyes felling scared!!

After few seconds he open his eyes and huffs....

Shiva-aaj marte marte bach gaya...

Are u okay..?? I am sorry.....someone said

Marhami sa chaand hai tu
Diljala sa main andhera
Ek dooje ke liye hai
Neend meri khwaab tera

His heart skipped as he heard the voice..
It was a sweet voice filled with concerned....

Are u fine..?? Actually maine kuch jaan ke nhi kiya...aap suddenly se samne aa gye....

He turns and saw her...He lost his all sense....she was beautiful....She look so gorgeous,her eyes were glowing....

Tu ghata hai phuhar ki
Main ghadi intezar ki
Apna milna likha
Isi baras hai naa

He was staring her.....

Aap kuch bol kyu nhi rhe h..?? Kahi pe chot lagi h kya??(concerned)

Her voice bring him out of his trance...

Tum theek ho na..??

He just nodded....

Thank god...I am really sorry...vo maine dhyan nhi diya..

Shiva-it's ok...I am okay....u don't worry..

She gave a warm smile...He smile back..

Naye ho..?

Shiva-yess....

Ohh...vaise akele ho ya phir koi h saath me...

Shiva-Mera friend h mere saath....

Ohh....ok I hope u will enjoy ur first day at our college...

Shiva-hmm

Dev comes from Otherside and saw them....

Dev-Raavi....

She turns...

(yes she was none other than our Raavi..)

Dev and Raavi hug each other....

Dev-yaar kal tere liye kya kya karna pada hme....

Raavi-haa vo devi tu hi h na...aur krishi krish....Paar yeh sab tumhe karna hi nhi parta...agar kal tum log mujhe drink nhi karate...maine pehle hi mana kiya tha...

Dev looks down embarrasingly....

Raavi-abb drame mat kar...it's ok chlta h...

Dev-vaise tu yha Shiva ke saath..

Raavi-aree dekh na mai abhi isse thokne walli thi..thank god control kar liya....
nhi toh ho jaata kalyan....

Dev-what Tu shiva ko thokne walli thi...

Raavi-tu isse jaanta h....

Dev-aree yeh Shiva jiske baare me maine tujhe bataya tha..mera best friend....

Dev gives him a side hug.....

Raavi-ohh yesss.....

Raavi forwards her hands...
Raavi-Hi I am Raavi Sharma...Dev's friend...

Shiva accepts her hands and smiles...
Shiva-Shiva..

She smiles...

Dev-accha agar tumara intro ho gaya h toh...class me chle...

Raavi-yaah...mai apni car park karke aati hu...u both go...

Dev-okay...

She left...

Shiva was staring her disappearing figure...

Dev-abee kha kho gya h chl chle....

Shiva-yaar kitni sundar h yeh...
Dev-vo toh h...par dikhne me jitni sundar h utni hi badi gundi bhi h....

Shiva-jo bhi ho...mere liye bhout pyaari h....

Dev-abee band kar apna gyan....chl mere saath....

He drags him towards the class room...

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At class room....everyone was there..
Raavi was laughing and talking with her friends....... Her hairs were flying....Her smile is beautiful.....

Jo meri manzilon ko jati hai
Tere naam ki koyi sadak hai naa
Jo mere dilkodil banaati hai
Tere naam ki koyi dhadak hai naa

He enters the room and saw her....he admires her.....she was perfect......

Raavi saw him and comes towards him...she shakes her hands in front of him and he comes back to senses....

Raavi-Hey...kha kho gye ho.....

Shiva-no nothing....

Raavi-comes join us....

Shiva smiles..

Raavi introduce him with everyone....

Divya-hayee kitna handsome h....mai toh mar gyi....

Raavi-pagal tu kabhi nhi badalne walli na.....jo bhi dikhega uspe fidda ho jaati h....

Rishita-Hi Shiva I am Rishita.....welcome to our gang....

Shiva shake hands with her.

Shiva-Hi....

Krish-aree bro tumari dosti iss pagal Dev se kaise ho gyi....

Shiva smiles....
Shiva-dev jitna bhi pagal ho...mere liye jaan se bhi badke h....

Dev-baas kar bhai rulayega kya..

All laughs. .

Then their proffesor comes all takes their seats...Shiva was standing at middle....Raavi holds his hand and makes him sit beside her....

All start studying.....

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All gather at caffe and chit chatting....they were discussing about studies......suddenly Dev's phone rings..

He excused himself and goes outside the caffe.....

Voice-Sir everything is done..
Dev-sab plan ke hisab se hona chahiye...
kuch gadbad nhi honi chahiye...
Voice-yes sir....

Dev-yeh baat kisiko pata nhi chalni chahiye....

Voice-yes sir...
Dev-saare saaman ready h na...
Voice-yes sir...aap bass ek order dena sab kar denge hum.....

Dev-ohk....Mai tumhe call kar dunga jab plan ko execute karna hoga...

Voice-okay sir...

Krish comes from behind and knocks his shoulder .
Krish-kisse baat kar rha h Dev...

Dev gets scared and his phone fells down....
Dev-vo mai...vo ..vo....(he stammers)

Krish hands his phone to him...
Krish-itna ghabra kyu rha h sab thik h na..
Dev-hmm...chl chalte h...
Krish-yess...
Dev(in mind)-thank god Issne kuch suna nhi.....

Both goes back to their work...
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At evening....
Shiva was going somewhere for his work....when suddenly it's start raining..

He was driving his car suddenly it stops.....
Shiva-abb isse kya hua...
He comes out and checks it....

It was raining heavily......
A car comes there and stops he looks towards the car....A girl takes out her hands from the window....and feels the rain drops.....then she opens the door and comes out....

She was stunned watching her...(yes she is our Raavi...) she was wearing a suit...she was looking very beautiful...

Koyi baandhni joda odh ke
Babul ki gali aaun chhod ke
Tere hi liye laungi piya
16 saal ke saawan jod ke

She starts dancing in the rain...she was jumping like a kid....shiva saw her and smiles....

Pyar se thaamna dor bareek hai
Saat janmon ki yeh pehli tareek hai
Dor ka ek main sirra

She twirls happily.....she was fully wet...
Her driver calls her....

Raavi-Raju bhaiya bas do minute...kitne dino baad aise baarish me bhigne ka mauka mila h.....

Driver-Parr Raavi beta sahab datenge...
tumhe fever ho jayega.....

Raavi-kuch nhi hoga uncle...

She enjoys the rain...Shiva was admiring Her...he starts taking steps towards her.....suddenly her leg slips and she was about to fall...but Shiva holds her hands .....she looks down and then at him.....

Aur tera hai dusra
Judd sake beech mein koyi tadap hai na

Shiva was smiling....both shares a deep eyelock.....they were lost in each other.....

He pulls her towards himself...she falls fully on his chest....they were very close...he can listen her breaths.....she close her eyes.....he hugs her....

Jo meri manzilon ko jati hai
Tere naam ki koyi sadak hai naa
Jo mere dil ko dil banaati hai
Tere naam ki koyi dhadak hai naa

Both goes in different world...rain stops and wind blows.... Raavi comes back to senses and open her eyes...she breaks the hug and looks towards Shiva...He also looks at her....

They don't know what to say each other...

Raavi-vo...thanks bachane ke liye...

Shiva-hmmmm....

Raavi-bye....

Shiva-bye...

She sat on her car....and starts leaving..he was looking towards her car...she looks behind through mirror and smiles....

Shiva rubs his neck and blushes....he repair his car and goes to his house...

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Precap-Raavi Hugs him tightly....He feels good.....his heart goes faster........
She hugs his arms and sleeps on his shoulder.....He admires her.....

That's it...

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