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After A Long 1 year.....

Hyderabad is shown...it was a busy city....
Sound-No....No...No...mujhe nhi karni h shaadi....please mujhe aur aage badna h life mein dad.....(A girl shouts)

Her Father-But beta tu samajh kyu nhi rhi h....meri aur teri maa ki iccha h ki tujhe settled dekhe.....beta kar le na shaadi aur tujhe kisne roka h aage badhne se....Tu toh apna career shaadi ke baad bhi continue kar Sakti h.....

Girl-No way.... please dad don't force me...

Her Father-Accha tu baith yha pe...
He made her sit on her bed....he holds her hands....

Her Father- Beta agar tujhe koi ladka pasand h toh bta de....hum teri shaadi ussi se karwayenge.....

Girl-No dad...aisa koi bhi nhi h.... please dad samjho na mujhe nhi karni shaadi...

Her Father looks down sadly...
Her Father- thik h jo Karna hai kar sirf tu Khush reh ..... Good night beta...

Girl-good night dad..

He leaves..

Girl's phone rings....she attends it...
Voice-Raavi....

(So yes the girl is none other than Raavi..)

Raavi-Haa bol Divya....
Divya-tujhe yaad h na kal ka din...

Raavi-bhout acche se mai kabhi bhi bhul nhi sakti kal ke din ko....ek saal pehle uss din maine bhout kuch kho diya tha......(her eyes becomes teary...)

Divya-yaar tu toh kuch jayada hi senti ho gyi....

Raavi-nhi tu meri baat chod...tu bata tu aa rhi h ki nhi...

Divya- tu bhul rhi h sayad ki promise maine bhi kiya tha.....

Raavi laughs....

Divya-aur kya chl rha h life me tere...
Raavi- vahi papa aur mummy ka roj ka h....shaadi karle...

Divya-toh kar le na....kya galat h issme...agar vo dono itna bol rhe h toh kar le Raavi.....kise kya pata kab kya ho jaaye....

Raavi-bass kar Divya abb tu bhi mat suru ho jaa...

Divya-Raavi tu mujhe sach sach bata....itne din me tune koi boy friend bhi nhi banaya....kyu....aisa toh nhi h ki tere ko proposal nhi aaye h......bass tune saare reject kar diye...kyu Raavi....tu na badal si gyi h uss din ke baad se.....hua kya tha aisa....uss din...

Raavi- Nothing....kuch nhi...kuch bhi nhi hua tha...tu please unn purane baato ko phir se maat nikal......aur yehh shaadi shaadi karna band kar....mujhe koi interest nhi h shaadi me.....samjhi.... bye good night kal milte h ...

She cuts the call and sleeps.....her tears roll down and wet the pillows.....
She was sobbing.....

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At 12 am......

A boy is shown sitting at a sofa....his back is shown...he ties his shoes...he was wearing a formal suite.....there was a pic he tooks it and cares it....his lips form a smile.... it's their friends grup photo....

He stands up and his face is shown in mirror....he was none other than Krish....

Krish-I am coming guys.....
He takes his bags and left.....
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At 12 am..

A girl is completing her office works....
Her friend calls her...
Her friend-Rishita....
She turns....

Rishita-Yar Shweta maine saara kam kar diya h....tu please sir se bol na ki kal ki chutti mil jaaye....kal ka din bhout important h.....agar unhe aur bhi kam h toh mai online kar dungi....please ek baar bol na.....(she said this in one breath)

Shweta- calm down Rishita....sir ne tere ko chutti de di h....go and meet with ur friends....yeh le teri tickets.....

Rishita smiles brightly....

Rishita- saach....
Shweta-yess....
She jumps in Happiness.....

Shweta-abee pagal pehle jaldi se station me jaa nhi toh train miss ho jayegi....
Rishita-ohh yes...yaar tu na dekh liyo yha sab kuch....

Shweta- tu tension mat le....mai sab dekh lungi...u just go.....
Rishita -thank u so much Shweta.....

She runs towards the station.....

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At 4 am...

A boy is shown running behind a bus....
he shouts-please stop...
Some boys forwards their hands and pulls him inside the bus......

He huffs....
Boy- thank you so much......
Other-it's ok....

Boy-agar aaj meri yeh bus miss ho jaati toh mera bhout bada loss ho jaata....
Other- kaisa loss....

Boy- aaj mai pure ek saal baad apne dosto se milne jaa rha hu...aur unse na milne se mera loss nhi hota toh kya hota.....

Others- aap logo ki dosti bhout paaki walli hogi phir toh....

Boy-hmm.....aur hum sab aaj ke din ke liye wait kar rhe the .......

Others- aapko kya lagta h...sab aayenge aaj.....
Boy- yess I am sure ki sab aayenge...but vo sayad se hi aaye.....

Others- aree sir aapne apna nam hi nhi bataya...
Boy-Dev....Dev nam h mera.....

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At caffe behind the XYZ College......
A car comes there and stops....Raavi comes out from the car....she was looking very cute ......she admires the place and remembers the last year..... suddenly his face comes in front of her eyes she opens her eyes.....her tears automatically fall down.....

Someone-Raavi....
She turns and there Divya and Krish was standing.....trio looks at each other and smiles.....trio hugs each other tightly......

Raavi-kaise ho tum dono....
Krish- tu hi soch kaise reh sakte h tere jaise drama queen se dur reh ke....

Raavi hits his arms.....he gives her a side hug....

Raavi- bhen tu kitni moti ho gyi h....golu molu si ...
Divya- yaar aise toh mat bol....
Krish-Raavi tu kya bol rhi h...yeh toh pehle se hi aisi h....( He laughs...)

Rishita-tu bhi bada formal ban gaya h pagal .....

All looks behind there she was standing...she was looking very tired....
Krish- Rishita....

Raavi- Rish......
Both look at each other and hugs tightly...Krish Divya and Dev also joins them.....they all tease each other and laughs......

Raavi still looks towards the door hoping that someone will come....

Dev-kiska intejar kar rhi h tu Raavi...jisse tune ek saal pehle iss din pura tod diya tha.....

Raavi looks at him...
Raavi-Dev...ye kya bol rha h tu....
Dev- tu hi bol kya maine galat bola h...Raavi..

Raavi's eyes becomes teary...after long one year her hidden sadness comes out...

Dev-vo nhi aayega ...Raavi....kyuki maine dekha tha uss din uski kya halat thi....itna tutne ke baad koi kaise vapas aa sakta h Raavi.....

Raavi starts crying.....
Raavi- Dev...vo mera bhi dost h....
Dev- h nhi tha....

Krish- hey guys...Shiva kha h....vo nhi aaya...

Divya-haa uske bare me toh hme kuch bhi nhi pata h....kha pe h vo....

Rishita- uska number bhi change ho gya tha uss din ke baad se....hume se kisi ka bhi uske saath contact nhi h....

Krish-Dev usne tujhe bhi nhi bataya...
Dev-kaash bata deta....toh aaj mai akele nhi hota yha.....

Divya-ho sakta h Shiva bhi aa rha hoga..tab tak hum log kuch kha lete h bhout bhuk lagi h...

Rishita- yaah ....bhout jayada ....
Rishita's head spins...they all hold her and makes her sit....and order some juice and food.....
They all were chit chatting and sharing their experience....

Krish-yaar bore ho rhe h chl Raavi jaldi se ek song suna de....
Raavi-mai...

Dev-yha Raavi aur kiska nam h....
Raavi- yaar but...mai

Rishita-gaa na Raavi kitne din ho gye h teri awaj nhi sunni....

Raavi-okay .....
She start singing.....

Kaisi teri khudgarzi
Na dhoop chune na chhaaon
Kaisi teri khudgarzi
Kisi thor tike na paaon

Everyone remembers their old memories....Raavi close her eyes... Shiva's smiling face comes in front of her eyes.....

Ban liya apna paigambar
Tar liya tu saat samandar
Phir bhi sookha mann ke andar
Kyun reh gaya

She was recalls their first meer....first talk....their beautiful memories.....

Re kabira maan jaa
Re fakeera maan jaa
Aaja tujhko pukaare teri parchhaaiyan

A car comes and stops in front of the caffe.... Everyone looks towards the car....Raavi can feel him....her tears form their way to her eyes...
Raavi Whispers - Shiva.....

Re kabira maan ja
Re fakeera maan ja
Kaisa tu hai nirmohi kaisa harjaaiya

The car door opens and a handsome boy wearing formal suite and sunglasses comes out.....

Dev Krish Divya and Rishita saw him and runs towards him.....Raavi was still sitting inside and looking at him continuously......

Dev and Krish hug him immediately and Shiva also hugged them back....
Dev-itni der kardi aane me tune ....kha tha tu pagal....

Ktish-hme toh laga tha tu aayega hi nhi...

They break the hug and admires him...
Shiva-Sorry Everyone.... actually bhout traffic tha aur office ka bhi bhout kam tha....par dekho na mai aa gya...

Divya-vaise Shiva tum toh pehle se bhi jayada handsome ho gye ho....

Shiva-Aur tu pehle se bhi jayada cute ho gyi h....

Everyone smiles.....
Shiva give a side hug to Rishita.....
Raavi was watching them from inside through glass.....she touches Shiva's image.....

Krish-Aree andar chlte h.....
Dev-yes...

They all comes inside...Shiva takes steps towards Raavi....His heart start beating faster....he knows this feeling.....the same feeling which he feels when she came close to him.....

Raavi face back side....Shiva saw her back...Rishita serves him a glass of juice...
Krish to Raavi - Aree tujhe kya hua h Shiva se nhi milna....

Raavi wipes her tears and turns...and their eyes met after a long year... Their eyes were freaking out their pain...Shiva didn't able to control his feelings and the glass of juice breaks on his hands...

Raavi shivers she was about to hold his hands but he takes back steps....Divya gives him a napkin he clears it by own....it was bleeding badly..... Everyone was looking at him shockingly as he was not even reacting....He was just looking at her eyes deeply....his eyes was filled with anger,pain and sadness.....

Shiva excuse himself and goes to washroom.....he throws the napkin in dustbin and looks at himself in the mirror...

Shiva-Raavi...yeh nam....yeh nam mere dil me rehta tha kabhi.....aur aaj meri zindagi me khi nhi h ....... mujhe tumari shakal kabhi nhi dekhni thi....par aaj tumhe phirse dekhkar itne dino ka chupaya hua dard wapas jag gya......kyu aayi ho phirse tum Raavi....kyu.....

His eyes becomes red.... tears were rolling down...... Otherside Raavi was sitting alone... everyone was waiting for him.....
Raavi-Guys kal ka plan banate h...aaj mai ghar jaa rhi hu....meri tabyat kuch thik nhi h.....

Rishita-tu thik toh h na Raavi...
Raavi-haa....bass thoda sa uneasy feel ho rha h....thoda sa rest lene se thik ho jayungi .....

Krish-tu kha pe jayegi abhi...
Raavi-kissi hotel me chli jayungi....
Dev-toh tu bata de ...hum bhi vahi pe aa jayenge ....
Raavi- no it's ok...tum log enjoy karo ..mai kal tum logo se meet karti hu..bye ...
She start leaving....but someone holds her hands..... it's him...she turns...

Shiva-Miss Raavi...tum bhag kyu rhi ho..tumne hi hum sabse promise karwaya tha ki aaj hum sab reunion party karenge....phir kha jaa rhi ho itni jaldi....(with full attitude)

He was pressing her hand tightly....it's hurting her.....
Raavi - Shiva mujhe jaana h...
Shiva-Omg tumhe mai yaad hu...mujhe toh laga tha ki bhul gyi hogi...mujhe jaise uss din kiya tha.

Raavi-Shiva Please.....meri tabyat thik nhi h....
Shiva-don't worry thik ho jayegi....

He makes her seat on the chair harshly...
Shiva- guys...chlo na let's do a party....
He serves wine for everyone....Raavi denies to drink but he forcefully made her drink it......In the full party....Raavi And Shiva didn't talk they just stare each other.....

After sometime Everyone leaves except shivi ...Raavi stands up and takes steps forwards but her toe tripped and she was about to fall....but one strong hand holds her ...and he was none other than Shiva.....

Raavi-itna torture kar hi rhe ho to abhi bhi girne dete.....
Shiva pulls her towards himself....she falls on him...they were very close...

Shiva-Torture...jo tumne kiya tha uske samne toh yeh kuch bhi nhi h...

Raavi- Shiva... please bhul jayo vo sab....
Shiva-bhul jayu...kaise...kaise bhul jayu...

Raavi-Shiva hum phirse ek shuruwat kar sakte h...
Shiva- Sorry Miss Raavi....mai apne life me move on ho chuka hu jisme tumari koi jagah nhi h..tum mere liye sirf mere dosto ki dost ho...aur kuch nhi....

Raavi was looking at him cryingly.....
Shiva wipes her tears.....
Shiva-please don't cry....kuch bhi ho jaye...tumare ankho me ansu nhi dekh sakta mai aaj bhi.....bye.....

He leaves....

Raavi was looking at his disappearing figure....
Raavi- yeh sab kya tha Shiva...kabhi gussa toh kabhi pyaar....aur kya kaha tumne ki mai sirf tumari dost ki dost hu...kyu itna dur kar diya mujhe....kaise samjhu tumare andar kya chl rha h....
kaise....(cries)

Shiva goes to his hotel room and throw his coat in his bed and takes a wine bottle and start drinking.....he starts crying......he shouts and throws everything here and there ......his situation was very bad......

Shiva- kaise bhul jayu tumhe Raavi...
kaise.....Pyaar karta hu tumse mai....aur pyaar ko bhulna itna asaan h kya....(he cries)

Raavi was driving the car....her tears were falling.....she saw his photo in phone and touches it.....

Raavi-kya hamari dosti itni kacchi thi ki itni asani se tut gyi Shiva....(she cries)

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