By VIBE311253

Title: Direct and straight-forward, it attracts readers.

Blurb: It goes straight to the point without any info dumping; still, it's detailed enough to tell us a little bit more about Jay Hunter and the mysterious Number Z.

Cover: I love the forefront picture and the general concept of the cover. Perhaps, you could place the text differently and make it more readable.

Plot: I read the prologue and Chapter 1, with the hope to continue reading more of this story - anyway, I'm likely to continue it. The characterization is very strong and a crucial element in plot development. I also love how characters interact with each other. Description is on point.

Grammar: I think your grammar is on point. I found no serious mistakes as of now.

Overall rate: 9/10

Would I recommend reading this story? If you love action and fights, then this is a story you'll love!