by MclaineMoran

Title: The title is mysterious and pulls readers in.

Cover: I love it. Whoever made it definitely captured the essence of the story.

Blurb: I love it because it's not too revealing but gets straight to the point.

Plot: So far you have the prologue and three chapters, so I read them all. I like that there is continuity between the prologue and the first chapter. I also appreciate how you balance backstory, description, narration and dialogue.

Grammar: Your grammar is on point, save for misused genitives (ex. "mothers" instead of "mother's") or missing apostrophes (ex. "cant" instead of "can't").

Overall rate: 8/10

Would I recommend reading this story?: Yes, I would. This story is filled with action and mystery, which is always intriguing when well-done like in this case.