by AuthorNikV

Title: I suppose it's part of a saga, right? I like this title, it's mysterious and doesn't give too much away.

Cover: I love it because it matches the story's theme and it's also appropriate.

Blurb: Straight-forward and point, I have to compliment you for this. I also like that you introduce the protagonist almost immediately.

Plot: You only have the prologue so far, so I read that. I hope you update more of this, by the way. Your prologue is kind of long, but I think you made a smart choice. It's important to set a backstory and you did it perfectly. I also find the choice of not introducing the protagonist straight away. A question: is Vincent related to the title saga's protagonist?

Grammar: Perfect. You had no mistakes that were worth being pointed out.

Overall rate: 9.5/10

Would I recommend reading this story?: Definitely! If you're looking for action, this story is perfect for you.