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The start from kartik and Manish Stromed out from there in different direction . He went inside the room and look the room from inside and start throwing things here and there . Kartik shout top of his lungs .

Kartik ( shout ) - aaahhhhhhh

And he kneeled down on floor with thud and crying loudly holding Saumya 's photo . Naira could heard his crying and his shout too she was hell worried for him . She herself crying and continuously calling keerti . Finally keerti recieved the call .

Keerti - hello naira ....

Naira ( sigh in relief ) - thank God di aapne phone utha liya . Bahaut time se call kar rahi thi main aapko .

Keerti ( worriedly ) - kya huaa naira sab theek hai naa ??  kartik....kartik theek hai naa ??

Naira ( look at door ) - nahi dii kuch bhi theek nahi hai bahaut kuch hogaya hai yaha .

And she told everything to keerti . Manish and kartik fight and kartik lock himself in room . Keerti was scared heard that . She know what must be going through on kartik  specially today . She knew how much he love their maa and how much he miss her . She very well aware of kartik 's condition specially today .

Keerti - naira please usse akele maat chodo . Aaj ke din uspe kya beet rahi hogi only I know . Please kaise bhi karke darwaza khulwane ki koshish Karo .

Naira ( nodded ) - haa keerti di main try karti hu ( bang the door ) kartik please darwaza kholo . Kartik please kholo aapne best friend ki baat nahi manoge .

Kartik 's friend too bang the door but they didn't get respond from other side . Naira asked kartik 's friend to go and check Manish she is there with kartik .

Scene shift to kartik

Kartik was crying continuously holding Saumya 's picture . He was shivering badly and get flashbacks of his past .

Kartik beta aapna dhyan rakhna mumma ab Jaa Rahi hai . I love mera baccha .

Kartik ( shout ) - aahhhhh no please maa .....

He get up and and start finding saumya here and there and shouting Saumya 's name . Naira came inside after breaking the door with the help of abhinav . She was shocked to saw kartik 's condition . She calm him down and made him sit . Kartik hug her from waist and crying chanting saumya 's name .

Naira ( holding his hand ) - kartik main yahi hu dekho . Calm down .

Naira laid him down on the bed she sat by his side wiping his tears and crassed his hair .

Kartik ( in broken voice ) - naira ...maa ( pointing toward wall ) ro..ko maa ko

Naira look at wall and find no one .

Naira - kartik waha koyi nahi hai ( cupped his face ) see yaha main hu aur koyi nahi .

Kartik come out from the hug and get hyper .

Kartik ( traumatized ) - hai maa wahi hai woh mujhe chod ke jaa rahi hai tum dekho naa dhyan se .

Naira was preplexed to saw kartik 's behaviour . Just then she remember keerti is still on line .

Naira - keerti di kartik ki halat bigadti jaa rahi hai . Main kya karu mujhe bahaut daar lag raha hai ( tears rolled down from her eyes )

Keerti - naira woh jo keh raha hai woh maanlo iss waqt woh trauma main hai . Please uska dhyan rakhna . Please .

Naira ( wipe her tears ) - yes I will take care of him .

Naira hugged him and snuggled him to his neck . He continuously chanting maa . She felt he miss his mother . Keerti send him lori  which saumya used to sang for both of them . Naira play it . Kartik lay down in her lap and snuggle her to more . Naira ruffle his hair and soon he sleep in her lap only .

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At midnight kartik was sleeping in naira 's hug and keerti was on video call as keerti was tensed for kartik and she don't want to leave him alone not even for nano second .

Naira was still awake after some kartik too wake up and recalled the incident when he was trauma and naira console him . He saw keerti was also on line . He get up and sit beside naira holding her hands .

Kartik - keerti I am sorry meri wajhse tujhe bhi pareshani huyi aur ( to naira ) aur naira tumhe bhi .

Naira nodded in no asked her not to apologize .

Keerti ( feeling guilty ) - tu kyu sorry bol raha hai sorry toh mujhe bolna chaiye . Aaj ke din mujhe tumhe akela nahi chodna chaiye tha .

Kartik - nahi keerti isme tumhari koyi galti nahi hai . You know naa aaj ka din ham dono ke liye kitna dukh bhara hai .

Keerti - ham dono ke liye nahi kartik sab ke liye including papa aur tujhe pata hai naa aaj ke din kya haalat hoti hai tumhari toh phir kyu papa se jhagda Kiya .

Kartik ( roll his eyes ) - keerti stop it please galti Mr goenka ki thi unhone kyu maa ki photo ko haath lagaya he has no right on her .

Keerti ( raise her eyebrows ) - kartik .... 

Kartik didn't heard anything and cut the call and place the laptop aside . He cover his face with his palms and sat on the bed .

Naira just look at kartik retreating figure blankly . She get scared when she saw kartik in that condition . Naira knew something was in his past but she don't know he is traumatized to this extend because of his past . Kartik turned toward naira and apologize her .

Kartik ( looking down ) - I am really sorry naira I was not in my senses aur .... hug and all

Naira - don't need to said sorry dost hu main tumhari so relax aur waise bhi mendak taar taar karte huye acche lagte hai maafi mangte huye nahi .

Kartik chuckled at this remark and naira too .

Just then kartik recall naira play saumya 's lori . He immediately turned toward her .

Kartik - naira ( she hummed ) jo maa ki Lori tumne play ki thi woh ek baar phir karo naa .

Naira nodded and she played the lori . Kartik take phone from naira 's hand and kept it near his heart, close the eyes and feel the moment . Naira saw his each and every keenly . He turned toward naira , held her hand and said .

Kartik - naira tum nahi jaanti yeh lori mere liye kya hai ( suddenly feeling sad ) but sadly yeh lori mere saath zayada time taak nahi reh paayi . Reh gayi toh sirf yeh recording ( show her phone )

Naira blankly look at kartik. 

Kartik - you know what maa naa bilkul tumhari tarah thi dhakad bilkul sherni type . Hamesha ghurrane ko tayar . Tabhi toh dadi aur unki baanti nahi thi paar dheere dheere woh sherni chali gayi unke andar se maine meri maa ko sherni se billi bante dekha hai . Mr goenka ke aage sehamte huye dekha hai .

" Shaant nahi rekh sakti atleast bacchon ke  saamne toh aisi harkate maat karo "

Jee samjh gayi  .

Kartik close his eyes and tears brimming out from his eyes remember the incidents . He start shivering due to his trauma .

Kartik ( deep breathing ) - breathe in breathe out .

After sometime he get normal and turned to naira .

Kartik ( take a deep breath ) - Aur iss sab ki ek hi wajah the aur woh the Mr Manish goenka aur Swarna goenka . They are the reason of my mom's death ( Shout ) Mr Manish goenka aur unki beloved wife swarna goenka ne maar Diya meri maa ko ...... Maar Diya meri maa ko naira ( and he crying silently )

Naira held his hand and rub his back .

Kartik ( back off his hand ) - aur yahi reason hai ki mera unse koyi rishta nahi hai . Haar step maa buri nahi hoti I knew it kyunki Maine Devyani dadi aur varsha mami ko dekha hai but kaise uss aurat ko main aapni maa maan lu jo meri hi maa ki maut ki wajah ho . Jisne Mera sab kuch ......sab kuch cheen liya ho tum hi batao naira how will I accept her in my life .

Kartik tell her how he  Manish , saumya and keerti was a happy family . How Manish used to love him and keerti alot specially their mother . He also tell how after their mother's death he and keerti become alone . He tell everything was fine  until swarna come in their lives as Manish 's secratary and Manish start spending most of the time with her in office . Constant fight happened between Manish and saumya and he also tell how he used to saw shouting his dad on his mother  . He also show saumya 's picture to naira .

Kartik ( lost in past ) - main aur keerti inn sab se bahaut affect huye dadi keheti thi time ke saath sab theek hojayega but aisa kuch nahi huaa things getting worst day by day aur ek din

Kartik get up from the place and punch on wall and tried his level best to control his panick attack .

Naira ( worriedly ) - kya huaa ek din kartik ....

Kartik ( numb ) - maa ne aapni parishaniyo se tang aake suicide kar liya .

Naira was numb to heard she don't know how to react . Kartik too lost in his past and remember the incident . Her mother did sucide infront of him .  He was the first one to saw her in that condition .

Kartik - aaj hi ....Aaj hi ka din tha naira jab maa ham sab se dur ...gay..i thi ( describe the incident ) sab meri aankhon ke saamne huaa tha . Ek - ek paal yaad hai mujhe ek ek scene aaj bhi aakhon ke saamne ghumta hai . 15 saal pehele Kal ki raat maa mujhe aur keerti ko Sula rahi thi sulane ke baad woh washroom main chali gayi she thought we slept but main nahi soya tha Maine dekha tha maa ko washroom main jaate huye aur phir nahi aayi 2 ghante hogaye maine washroom main check Kiya chachu ko bulaya and mom was lying unconscious with blood .

And he remember saumya 's condition .

Kartik ( shout ) - no maa .......

And he hug naira tighlty clutching her dress remember Saumya 's condition and went into trauma . He continuously chanting saumya name and plead her to recover soon .

Naira rub her back and tried to calm him down but he was still traumatized . Naira too was in pain seeing kartik in pain .

After sometime when he get Normal he immediately seprate from her and continue telling how saumya was taken to hospital he and keerti praying continuously for their mother in the temple . Saumya 's dead body infront of him his condition evrything .

Kartik ( holding naira hand ; sobs ) - sab kuch khatam hogaya uss din naira .... Sab kuch . Maa mere saamne thi lifeless I and keerti just call her , plead her to come back par woh nahi aayi sirf 8 saal ka tha main naira sirf 8 saal ka and I lost my mom naira I lost my everything ( he crying hiding his face in her hands )

20 din ....20 din trauma main raha main naira I was blank kuch nahi khaya Maine paani bhi nahi Piya zabardasti keerti pila de toh pila de warna main toh bilkul numb tha roya bhi nahi tha . Phir....phir maasi aayi unke saamne roya break down huaa mera .

" Kartik beta dekho main aagayi mumma nahi hai toh kya huaa maasi toh hai naa maasi bhi maa jaisi hi hoti hai .

Kartik crying in her arms almost for  half an hour .

Kartik - uske baad phir mere so called pitaji ne aapne rang dikha diye 20 din baad mr goenka mrs goenka se shaadi kar ke ghar le aaye aur wahi se shuru huyi hamre beech nafrat aur ladaiya .

"Mr goenka I hate you aapki wajhse meri maa Mari hai "

Kartik ( raise his hand but stop ) go to your room right now kartik . Right now " 

Kartik rest his head in naira 's lap and just crying continuously . Naira was feeling bad for kartik as he suffered alot in such a small age . Pain of loosing mother in such a tender age is very big . Thought of loosing loved ones is frightened her but kartik experience that pain that too in such a tender age . Now she respect kartik more although so much enduring in his heart still he is so optimistic .

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So guys this was the chapter I hope you like it .

Guys in show naira 's past and trauma and was seen clearly but not kartik 's pain . Pain of loosing mother is very big and that too in such tender age but kartik 's pain and trauma was not shown clearly . We couldn't even get trauma of kartik in show . So I decide to write this story to show kartik pain . I hope you all are like it .

Suggestions are always welcome .

Precap - will go according to flow

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