You may have noticed I deleted all but this chapter.

Because this story was in desperate need of rewriting and to prove I'm actually doing it this time, here's some of the hard work that's been going into my new notebook this week

HAHAHAHAHA have fun trying to make sense of that

And also here's a complete list of all the characters by their gemstones because I actually came up with better names. (Using a fantasy name generater because I'm not creative) wait actually I did that for the kingdoms and I actually came up with all twelve Kingdom names go to my rant book for a pic of that. It's one of the recent chapters. So yeah I did come up with the main names on my own.

I used the birthstones for these so if you want to know which they are look it up

Emma (I need ideas should I keep her name at Emerald shortened to Emma, or another name?) - Emerald
Jay - (short for Jayden because I can) Sapphire
Ruby - Ruby duh
Moon - Moonstone
Opal - Opal duh (so creative with names right)
Dia - Diamond
Topan - Topaz
Blue - Turquoise (my birthstone!)
Akon - Aquamarine
Garian - Garnet
Amon - Amethyst
Perrin - (this is a real name btw I didn't just warp the gem name this time) Peridot

Are these stupid? Let me know what you think, and if you have a better name for anyone, let me know, I'll be happy to consider it.

Guess who's boys and who's girls I wanna see what you guys think. (I already have it planned I'm just curious)

Trueeeeee colors and that's why I loooove you.

Sorry listening to music

I'm also going to do chapters in everyone's perspective because I feel like that's better to get to know all the characters and rip your hearts out harder when I kill them I mean whaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaat. :)

Also: should I kill Adeline in my new version? Before you say yes or no, consider that she's much more of a lovable character in the new story. The mother is worse and I'm planning on killing her and leaving dad in charge. Also Adeline and Em are half sisters instead (makes more sense when you think about it, because I'm keeping the whole dragon parent thing)

Because I'm having her being forced to marry etc etc you know and she's telling Em about her perfect prince and I was thinking well hey what about _____ I'm not saying the name because I don't want to give too much away. She'll get captured instead of killed (still doing a variation of the party/ballroom scene) So it's either that or

She dies, and during Em's while journey she can think about how much she misses her sister and I can rip your hearts out (keep in mind this is ripping my heart out too) And when Em finally meets _____ she can think how much Adeline would've loved him.

Third option: Adeline get captured, and she lives for a little while after they capture her, and maybe at either the final battle or the sequel (yea it's gonna happen maybe probably) she dies and has just enough time to fall in love with _____ and then die

Your choice :)