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So, I've finally finished my main book that I've been working on for most of the year in Hidden In Plain Sight. It feels so good to have worked so much on a book that I've personally loved writing.

To compare it to my other works, it's the one with the most views in the shortest time, the one with most votes in the shortest amount of time, the one that shows that I've improved as a writer when reading back on my other works in the past. It's the one that I might have abused without doing a chapter for a long time, but the last half year of writing it has been fun. And I'm glad about that.

And to move on, I've got a new work that I've got a block written for already. It's called The Four Of Us, and I hope that you guys will give it a read and give me any tips to improve on it with, as it's the first POV work I've done in a while, so please critique.


Serena Blanche is in the final year of high school, and is on course to get record marks in history at Hau'oli Beach High. She is beautiful, but very quiet and shy, losing her mother at a young age with her father taking on that role too, but her friends have helped bring her back. She was looking for that one guy she could love, that guy who would accept her for who she is.

Ashton Ketchum is in the same predicament as Serena. In line for being drafted in the lottery of the NBA draft, he is hot stuff on campus and was the guy of girls' dreams. But will being the the shadow of his older brother Red be his downfall and the stress of being manager at his uncle's restaurant be too much for him?

Shauna O'Connell is an aspiring artist. Paint, pencil, graphics, the world is her canvas. She has dreams of becoming a graphics designer when she grows up. She was once in love, before she had her heart broken and is mostly alone, with not many friends. Can she forgive the guy who did it and move on, or will she be ever alone?

Gary Oak, Ash's best friend since they were little, has a mind for science and computers. Video games and chemistry are his portfolio, and he wants to be a surgeon or computer tech. But will his cockiness and flamboyance around girls screw over his career and future?

When they all get put into one dorm for their last year of school, they will form new bonds. New friends, new perspectives on life, and even possibly new forms of feelings.

There's the blurb and cover if you wanna give it a read if it's up for your fancy.

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