So, I wrote a songfic, and it's called, Lost One's Weeping. I realize that this is one of the most popular songs to write a songfic for, but I wrote this actually for a school project and my friend told me to post it on here. So I will be, but I want your input first. Just to make sure that this isn't a book I am re-doing and I get less than 10 views on. So yeahh... Please be honest! ^_^

Sweat was dripping down my forehead. No matter how exhausted I was, I knew that I had to keep running for my life. "No..." I whispered ever so quietly. "I can't die, yet." It felt like this nightmare would never end. Finally, I reached to the end of the Forsaken Labyrinth, other wise known as my dream world. I was greeted with a blinding white light and a whisper in my right ear. "Good riddens," is all I could make out. Before I could reach the bright light, I felt a cold, wet knife go through my back.

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"GAH!" I screamed, as I fell out of my bed. "Well, good morning to you too, world." I muttered, adding that bitter, sarcastic tone to my voice. 'It's been the third night in a row that I have had that same dream. Will I ever be enveloped by that welcoming bright light? Or will a steel blade keep me from letting me enter my peace of mind? I will just have to find out...' I thought, while staring up blankly at the cieling, forgetting that I have school today.

So... What did you think? Give your personal opinion in the comment section!~ >w<