Ladybug pov
I came running in to find Chat Noir, on top of another Chat Noir. I was so confused, who was the real Chat? The Chat on the ground suggested to ask the one on top of him about our 'love for each other', and that's how I found out the one on top was definitely the copy cat.
"Cataclysm!" The copy cat yelled and soon after I yelled "Lucky Charm!"
"A spoon, what am I supposed to do with this?" I asked in confusion while holding the spoon.
Before giving me a chance to figure out what to do with the lucky charm, the copy cat rushed towards us. I quickly grabbed the chain holding the real Chat Noir and calculated where I should hold it so that when the copy cat goes to attack us, he will hit the chain, freeing the real Chat Noir. I held up the chain and closed my eyes, waiting for the chain to crumble in my hands, but I felt nothing. Not only did I not feel the chain crumble, but I didn't even feel the chain, or anything else. My mind was rushing, and my heart beat, was surprisingly decreasing, not increasing. This scared me. Then, I opened my eyes to find out that I was laying on the ground, then I felt something. I felt pain in my torso, it hurt so bad and it was getting really hard to breathe. I looked around to see that Chat had handled everything himself. He was running towards me, and he looked as if he was yelling, and he looked very distressed. Then I noticed that I couldn't hear anything. I looked down at my torso and was shocked by what I saw and the pain increased and it hurt so much. I felt something, and looked to see Chat crying while doing something to my torso , but I didn't have the strength to find out what he was doing. I then looked up to see the ceiling, then saw and felt nothing.
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So... 1 I was thinking about doing this whole scene in Chats point of view, which would describe things alot better, then continue the story, should I?
And... 2 should I even continue the story?? Like is it a good story?? Do you like it so far?? Btw I just wrote this and I'm very tired so... yeah.