So I was looking through some of my old art and I stumbled across this. OH BOY. These were some warrior ocs I had a while back, and just thinking about their backstory pains me. It was so bad. The brown starclan one was named Doe (yes, Doe..) and the one with faucets for eyes was named Moss. Wonderful start. They were both loners because their mother got exiled for eating a squirrel. She just ate a squirrel she had caught. That was all. WOW. my reasoning was that she "should have shared it with the clan". oof. Anyways, she started a clan on her own (which I think was called leafclan) and had kits. Then Thunderclan attacked them (for no reason) and Doe died. Wow. And to add insult to injury, all the characters in the story were either Mary Sues or evil. Fun. Anyways, I decided to redraw this mess of a drawing and share it with you all. I hope you think I've improved.
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