This book is awesome so far!

Check out --distress-- 's "For Him". It's a Septiplier story and my god it looks good so far! Keep it up man! You're doin good!

And I'll go ahead and start a little bit of feedback here.

Make sure you keep in in the same tense. Either it's past or present. I saw it in both tenses on and off while I was reading.

Otherwise, I loved it!