[ So I have Advil beside me because I KNOW I'll have to use it ]

Chatter NEIN Teh Evil Tigger and holY
I SAID NO FLAMES! YOUR JUST JELOS YOUR GOING 2 HEL LJESS IS OYUR SAVER
[ Don't talk to me about Jesus, this book is a sin even he can't forgive! ]

"Ohno its HolyLeaf!" yelled FireStra he ranned away. SandStrom wnet aftre him.

StarGlaem locked up. HolyLeaf was stnding their and their was anodder chat with hr.

"OMIGOSH ITS TIGGERSTAR!" she hossed. "WHTA WIL WE DO!"
[ Tiggerstar.....what's he gonna do? Bounce you to death?! ]

"we figt." saud Jayfeathre and he ran at HollyLeaf. StarGlema washed as HolyLefa locked at JayFather and kiled him with one shot.
[ JAYFEATHER IS A MEDICINE CAT YOU NINNY! Besides even if he was a warrior he'd have a little more hesitance then that to kill his sister. ANOTHER thing is...Hollyleaf wouldn't be able to kill him in one " shot " ]

"YOU KILDED MY FTHER! she yelled and she attcked HolyLeaf. HollyPaw gut out of the way and StarPaw attaked TiggerSar.

"U killed TigerStra!" uelled FiresStar he locked happy. "You are speshil!"
[ MHM SPESHIL IS WHAT I'D CALL IT TOO ]

StarGleam was sooo happy, she didng notse as HollyLea grabbed Firestar and took him way.

"OH NO" yelled StarKit. "WE HAVE TO SAVE HIM!

a cilf hunger1!111! see im a god riter i no what thta id thx f4r the good revweiws JzzPaw && everon else WHOSE NIT A FALMER
[ Writing a really terrible cliffhanger doesn't make you a good wrighter!!! And the fact that you say you are makes you seem even more stupid...if that's possible ]