Please improve for me about essay " advantages and disadvantages of modern life"!

Today, with development of society, in our life changes time after time, it’s make our life more and more comfortable. Therefore, the young person like more living in the modern life than living in traditional life and so do I. 

In modern life, we can do spear to some friend white you are very far away from us by using telephone or internet, we can search a lot of informations on internet or study Elearning and especially we can see your partner in very far if you have Webcam.

Addition, modern life have a lot of road, cars, buses, trains, planes ete, transport help us travel from planes to other easily. Television not only entertains people but also teacher people a variety of importaint things. In some countries television is used to teach pupils and students many useful lessons. Students who can’t go to school because transport or other problems are taught all their lessons at home through television or internet

Beside advantages, modern life also has some disadvantages, forexample people in modern life always busy and they don’t have enough time to relax or visit their farmily. the air often is polluted…

In short, the modern life have the advantages and some disadvantages but it’s very comfortable and active.

THE BENEFITS AND DISADVANTAGES OF THE INTERNET 

No one can deny the benefits of the Internet in our life,but it also has disandvantages. 

The Internet is a very fast and convenient way to get information.It is an updated source of information where you can get the lastest local and global news. You can check weather condition before you go on a picnic, you can find time-tables and maps for your trip, you can book ticket for your flingt or reserve rooms in a hotel… 

The Internet is a various source of entertainment:you can listen to music, watch films or play games.You can communicate with friends or relatives far away from you very quickly by email or chatting. 

The Internet is also a mean of education where you can learn yourself.There are on-line shools for you to further your education or to study for a degree.There are on –line lessons for you to learn English as well as many other subjects…. 

However the Internet has limitations.It is not only time-consuming and costly , but aslo dangerous because of viruses and bad programs.Moreover, Internet users sometimes have to suffer various risks such as spam or electronic junk mail,and personal information leaking.So,while enjoying surfing, be alert!