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Name- Panda

Pretty nice, didn't expect him to be a NightWing.

Age- 25
Ok
Gender- Male
Ok
Family- His Dad NightWalker
                His Mother ShadeBringer
      Close Friend Calibri, and Seawing Skywing
Like the names!
Tribe- Pure Nightwing
Good to see a purebred, nowadays it's all hybrids XD
Rank- He used to work in the army, but retired and now teaches art in Jade Mountain Academy.
That's sweet! I feel like he's a little young to retire, but I like it!
Appearance- His main scales are a pure white, and his claws fade to black, he has dark grey horns, and has scales on top of his head that are black, and a black ring around his eye like a pandas. His eye is a deep crimson color, and he's missing his right wing, and missing a little less then half his tail. Instead of a starry/galaxy design under his wings it's a pastel green that fades at he end to a pastel purple. His expression makes him always look worried, and he lost most of his hearing in his left ear.
I like it! Very original, but the fact he's a purebred NightWing is making me question his marking a little bit. Maybe put in that he's got some other unknown tribes in him, or if you don't want to that maybe say he's got some weird DNA in his blood
Abilities- Normal Nightwing abilities, but he is more of a close combat fighter and has weak fire.
Like it! Good balance with the strong fighter but weak fire

Strengths- He's bulky and is rather strong, and quick on his feet.
A little basic, but no complaints
Weaknesses- He's easy to find in open spaces, a very heavy sleeper, and is very ignorant.
I don't see weaknesses like this a lot, so I like it
Dislikes- He hates when dragons stare at him and ask about his missing wing, hates eating meats.
Makes sense, but the meat thing is unusual for a NightWing. I like it
Likes- He loves fruits and sleeping, and likes swimming and enclosed areas.
Makes sense
Backstory- Panda had a generally normal childhood, with friends here or there, and was an only child. When panda was around 20, he helped in the war (i don't have any wars of phyrria in mind, so just choose one XD), and fought bravely. He ended up losing one of his wings, and less then half his tail, and nearly died from bloodloss. About 4 years after that, he retired and traveled to Jade Mountain academy, and taught art, due to always liking painting and drawing. He's still currently teaching there, and has a small love interest in a certain someone. >:3
I like it. It's a little on the basic side, and could use some developing, but if you're not planning on making him one of your main OCs then it's fine. Also who is this love interest you speak of 😏
Other- He lost some hearing in his left ear, and is horrible at math.
Like the missing hearing, pretty cool along with the math thing.

Overall I give him a 90/100. He's a little basic, but he has enough unique traits to where he doesn't seem cookie cutter. I'd love to see more of him, and see where his story goes. 😁

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