Here is another review for EtherealCity who wanted me to re-review her bnha oc. Normally, rereviews are shorter than normal reviews because I've seen the character before.

My comments will be in bold

Basics and grounding

Good inspirations and concepts. I always love a character that can bring a new concept to the universe.

Character information

I like the additions. Everything you've added here really helps flesh her out and makes her feel more well-rounded and thought out. Sometimes when people add to characters, they overdo it, but this is very well done.

Relationships

It's nice to see these relationships fleshed out a bit more. I understand that these fit with her backstory, but do be careful with the missing/dead parents thing because it is very common.

Backstory

Honestly, this is an incredible backstory and I actually really like this concept. It's similar to the cult-like one you told me last time but you've managed to add even more to it and improve and develop your concept, so really well done with this. This character is definitely a good one.

Other

Once again, the additions to this really help out make this character better, so good job.

Stats

I recommend at least giving her one 1 stat to balance her out and level out that 5 but apart this is fine.

Extra

Just because there was a character aesthetic at the bottom of the character page and I really like them

This is honestly such an adorable aesthetic and I don't see enough of them so good job putting this much effort into her.

Final thoughts
Overall, this is proof that a lot of little improvements can really add to a character. I only recommend a few small changes, but apart from that, this character is incredibly good. So very good job on this!

*My critiques are simply at your request and to help improve your character. It is not my intention to cause any offence and you, of course, do not have to listen to what I've said. This is all just a bit of fun and I apologise if I have done any kind of damage*