Here is a review for MadeItOutAlive

My comments will be in bold

Basics and grounding

Alright you haven't given me any universe grounding here so I'm not quite sure how any of this actually works. I assume it's an original universe due to the angels and demons concept even though it's pretty common. Come up with some basic universe rules and descriptions and that will help you build the characters around it.

Character information

This is descriptive and well detailed so good job on that. There are really only a couple of issues I have here. You have to be careful that you don't put too much into one character. This is most clear with her being both an angel and a demon.
Her name doesn't sound exactly realistic, but if everyone in this world has similar names then it's fine.
Try to be careful having an. Appearence that changes because if not handled correctly to give the impact it needs, it can come across as Marysuish.
Add more negative traits to her personality because it seems overwhelmingly positive and whilst you've attempted to add a bad point, vulnerability isn't exactly something people see as a bad thing, so please think about that.

Relationships

You've put a lot of thought into these relationships so good job with that. However, the relationships she has with her parents are pretty common. You say Lucifer tortures her, which is very clearly abuse. You can't just brush over stuff like that and you have to tackle it in a way that is respectful but doesn't brush over it.
Characters that have negative relationships with their parents are more common then not so you really have to work on them to make them stand out and have an impact.

Also, let's talk about Lucifer, he's an actual religious figure and very powerful figure. This goes back to establishing a universe and you gotta be careful using such power figures as a parent due to stuff like this being pretty common.

I don't have an issue with the rest of the relationships because they work well and make sense, so everything is good here.

Backstory

Whilst this does work, this is a very small and incredibly negative part of her past. You also never mention anything about healing or anything in her abilities and there's be no indication that she's blind or suffered any permanent damage from having her eyes removed, evne though you reference other scars. This again links back to world building and laying ground rules.

Add more positivity to this Backstory and interactions with other characters aside from her father, including her love interest.

Other

Even if she's a demon/angel, she's pretty op. Her weaknesses don't balance out the powers she's got and you can't just give one character everything. I don't recommend giving her super strength, incredible balance and the rarest ability in this world. You don't really mention that many drawbacks to these powers either. Unless everyone in this universe is on a somewhat close level to her, these don't work. Having a character, especially a protag, be op means that you struggle to route for them because you know that they're already going to succeed.

Stats
You didn't give me any stats but I recommend giving her some because thamey act as a basic fundamental structure for the character.

Final thoughts
I think this character could be pretty good but you have to work on not putting too much into one character because that way she feels more balanced and realistic.

*My critiques are simply at your request and to help improve your character. It is not my intention to cause any offence and you, of course, do not have to listen to what I've said. This is all just a bit of fun and I apologise if I have done any kind of damage*