Review 71 // Empira Asagi

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Here is another character review for PowerToLePotatoYEET

My comments will be in bold

Basics and grounding/character information



There's not really anything I can tell you to improve upon here. This is pretty well thought out and there's nothing wrong with it.

Relationships

These are fine, just make sure that these are shown to affect the character and are developed nicely.

Backstory

I think adding more detail here would be helpful, like coming up with more significant points in her life.

Other

These are good details as long as they're shown throughout the character.

Stats

These stats are fine and balanced.

Final thoughts
Sorry this is so short, there's not much I could have said here because there's not much wrong with the character. Focus on developing this character further and adding more details to make this character even better.

*My critiques are simply at your request and to help improve your character. It is not my intention to cause any offence and you, of course, do not have to listen to what I've said. This is all just a bit of fun and I apologise if I have done any kind of damage*

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