Review 76 // Honoka Mori

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Basics and grounding/character information



Wow okay, this is actually incredibly detailed and well done. There aren't any issues here as far as I can tell and I really like this character so far.

Relationships





Not very often you see a friends with benefits status in ocs. Even though they are kinda young, fwb it's plausible.

As far as the relationships go, they're very detailed and I don't have any issues with them, so good job.

Backstory

This works and makes sense, it's good to see a character following the dr tradition and actually getting killed. There are a lot of characters that survive the games but not many that die, so this is good to see.

Other

Cool. No comments here really.

Stats


These stats are fine and pretty balanced.

Final thoughts
There's honestly not much for me to say here, this character is pretty spot on and done well. If there's anything you need to do or want to improve on, maybe develop her romantic relationship further along with her murder. But this is really well done, so good job!!

*My critiques are simply at your request and to help improve your character. It is not my intention to cause any offence and you of course do not have to listen to what I've said. This us all just a bit of fun and I apologise if I have done any kind of damage*

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