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***Hello homies. So finally back. Some other day I wrote that I will be writing a very said OS but I know that many people don't like death parts etc etc, I won't be writing it yet.
By the title you all must have known that this is Another ending part of Broken Dreams, and this is just my perspective of what could have happened next. This one is not a sad ending so no worries. You all can read it. There might be some sad moments in this one too bcz the original story was sad. So isme bhi balti bhar bhar ke votes de dena. 😁***

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A lady in her mid 40's is is running behind a teen who was walking angrily on the hall. The lady ran to the girl and held her hand while the girl angrily jerked off the hand and turned back.

L: I said Vaani that you will not go the party mean you are not going. Meri baat suno and just go to your room and sleep.

The girl in her teens is Vaani. Full introduction is to be Vaani Shivaay Singh Oberoi. An 18 year old, well almost about to be 18 years in a month. She was born 3 years after Viaan died. The only person I known about her older brothers death. She gets very annoyed when her mother Annika stops and interferes in her partying, hanging out etc. A similar incident is happening right now. Let's peep in to it.

A: Vaani maine ek baar bola that you will not go to the party. Means you will not go.

V: But why mom, I too have a life to enjoy and I wanna go to the party with my fiends. What problem do u have with my freedom. Please tell me a damn reason for why not to go outside.

A: I'm answerable your your questions. I'm your mom. So meri baat suno and apne room mein jao right now.

V(shouting): Ya you know that's your problem. That's just your problem that you are my mom. Just that word MOM gives you the privilege of stopping me from going everywhere but I'm not your slave mom. I'm not. I have my own life. Since I have become a teen, you have just stopped me from going everywhere. To any parties with my friends, to birthdays, to malls alone, etc etc. Just tell me a damn reason why you always stop me mom. I'm feeling like a caged bird you know. Caged in just my room and this house.

Hearing Vaani's loud voice, everyone came out of their rooms while Shivaay entered the house, only to witness loud shots of his daughter and his wife standing in front of her. He stood there.

V: you know your any stupid reasoning won't justify what you did and what you are doing. You know what mom I HATE YOU. I HATE YOU DAMN IT. MY LIFE HAS BECOME MISERABLE SINCE I HAVE STARTINH TO UNDERTABD YOU. YOUR INTERFERENCE IN MY LIGE IS POISON AND IT IS SLWPLY KILLING ME. I EVEN REGRET THAT I TOOK BIRTH FROM YOUR WOMB. I HATE YOU MRS OBEROI. YOU ARE A BLACK DOT ON THE NAME OF MOTHERS.

Annika who was already low, hearing her daughter's words went completely numb. 'Her daughter hated her'. She couldn't digest that fact. Tears already made their way in her eyes but she prevented hard not to let them fall. While on the other hand, Shivaay who heard such venomous words from her daughter's mouth, was shocked beyond anything. This is definitely not what he and Annika has taught him. To disrespect her parents and her elders. He couldn't hold his anger more and shouted out loud, finally entering the house, taking fast steps towards Vaani.

S(shouting): VAANI.

He raise his hand to slap her but was stopped by Annika's look. He took his hand back while anger and disappointment was still dripping from his eyes.

S: Is this how you talk to your mother Vaani. She is elder to you god damn it. At least give that some respect. And what is this. How can u say all this rubbish to your mom.

V: Why dad. Why can't I. Maine kuch galat nahi kaha. She always wants to become mahaan. (Crying now) you know all my friends go out and hang out together, go shopping together, go to school trips and picnics together but what do I do. I can't go and you know why. Inki wajah se. Inki iss rok tok ki wajah se. Humesha se Vaani ur mat karo, Vaani vo mat karo. Inka bas chale to ye mujhe home schooling bhi karwa deti aur humesha keliye ghar pe bitha deti. She is a damn sadist dad and....

S: Stop it Vaani, not a word more. You have spoken enough. Apne room mein jao.

V: But dad.

S: I said go Ms Vaani Oberoi. Don't make me regret not giving you a tight slap.

Vaani turned towards Annika with tears and anger in her eyes and muttered a I HATE YOU and left from there, which was noticed by both Annika and Shivaay. Annika's heart broken again and she sat on the sofa with a thud and finally her tears started to fall down like a shower. Shivaay who saw his daughter going away, looked back at Annika immediately and sat beside her giving her some support. Shivaay looked at his family and nodded them to go to their rooms.

A: She hates me Shivaay. My Vaani hates me. What is my fault tell me. That I'm protective of her. You know na why... after whatever happened to Viaan... I.... I... I'm scared to loose her too. I know I'm not allowing her to go to parties etc but I'm also not enjoying seeing her like that. I always fear that what if something similar also happens with her. I....

She stated her feelings and bursted out crying on Shivaay's chest. Shivaay caressed her hair and went to Vaani's room, consoling her that he will y'all to their daughter. But upon reaching her room, he was shocked beyond his imagination when he saw Vaani sitting on the floor with the support of her wall, crying, with a knife in her hands, close to her wrist. He marched up to Vaani and harshly pulled her up, throwing the knife away and tightly slapped her. Vaani looked up to her dad, with red teary eyes, holding her left bruised cheek.

S(shouting loudly): What the hell were you about to do Vaani.

Annika who was downstairs sitting on the sofa, immersed in her thoughts, stood up hearing Shivaay's loud voice. She hurriedly ran up to Vaani's room. The sight in front of her was shocking. Shivaay standing there with red angry eyes, Vaani hiccuping holding her cheek and.... and a knife close to Shivaay's feet. She immediately understood what would have happened and walked up to Vaani with emotionless face. She looked up in Vaani's eyes and have her another tight slap on her right cheek. Annika started to sob.

A(teary eyed): What is this Vaani. What were you about to do. Cut you veins and commit suicide. (Shouting holding her shoulders) Do you even have the slightest idea of what what you were about to do. What is your problem Vaani.

V: My problem is you. This all is happening bcz of you. Bcz if you I'm caged. Bcz if you for the first time my dad slapped me. It's all happening because of you and only you.

Annika stepped back hearing her daughters words. Shivaay simultaneously looked at Vaani and Annika. Not able to grasp anymore venomous words, Annika walked outside, towards the kitchen.

There Shivaay disappointingly looks at Vaani.

S: This was not right Vaani. Not at all.

V: Ya you will also take side of your wife.

S: It's not about wife or daughter Vaani. It's about right and wrong.

V: So don't u see dad how she is doing wrong with me.

S: She is not wrong, she is just insecure. Just possessive of you. Worried for you. She cares for you, maybe more than I do. Maybe more than anyone in this world. (Sitting on the bed's edge, with hand on his forehead) She is already hurt from the past wounds, which are still not over, and today you made us reminisce the past, our dreadful past, AGAIN.

Vaani who heard Shivaay's words was tensed up. She sat beside Shivaay and held his hands.

V: What past dad.

S(teary eyes): That past which we all have buried inside our hearts from past 20 years. That past which still makes us shiver, inside out. That past which we never told you about.

Vaani looked on confused. Shivaay took out a photo from his wallet and showed it to Vaani.

S: About your older brother, Viaan.

V: Wait a second, I have an older brother. You guys didn't tell be that. Where is he...

S: He is not with us anymore. He died when he was 7 years old. 20 years ago.

Vaani, listening to Shivaay's words was shocked. Very shocked. She never in her life imagined that she would be having n older siblings, and that too dead. Then Shivaay explained her everything in detail, from the kidnapping, to Viaan's murder, to their breakdown and their depression, with Shivaay continuously wiping his tears, along with Vaani too, controlling her tears.

S: That sight is still not out of our heads. His body, his funeral, his last days... his.....(Shivaay wipes a tear) after that Annika went in depression, for two years. (Vaani looked at Shivaay stunned) and then one day we got the news that Annika was pregnant. But again due to her depression, she had complications in her pregnancy and you were born 2 months earlier than usual babies, unhealthy. Doctors were unsure about saving you, which broke us, especially Annika more. But u survived, and along with that, my Annika survived, from another heartbreak. Bcz if something would have happened to you, she would have not survived then. I know Annika has always stopped you from going outside, to shopping etc alone because she's is scared Vaani. She is scared to lose her child again, lose you, lose herself. It may be 20 years from that incident but our minds are still fresh with that memory. Now you know her reasoning. And what you called her Sadistic. Really... I'm very ashamed of you Vaani. You know till this date, I hid this thing from you bcz Annika didn't want you to get heartbroken too. And you.....

Just then Om came there and told Shivaay that Annika hurriedly went outside somewhere taking the car. Shivaay at instant knew where she went. He held Vaani's hand and took her in another car, to the place Annika went.

ANNIKA'S SIDE,

Annika is seen sitting near a grave, on the grass, the hand hand caressing the name written in it.

A: Hi mera baccha. Kese ho aap. Haan... acche hi honge. Meri jaisi maa se door to bohot khush hoge. You know today your sister called me a bad mother. She said she hated me bcz I caged her. And I really think now that I'm a bad mother, a mother who couldn't Pete t her son from this cruel world, a mother who was a failure in the past to take care of her son. Of you Viaan. I know one part of you must be hating me right now that I wish MOM that you could have taken a little more care of me then I would have been safe and didn't leave u and the family. And I'm not at all angry or upset with you for that. Bcz agar mein aapse ya aap mujhse upset ho gaye to fir main apne feelings kiske saath share karungi. (She chucked while wiping her tears) I'm sorry Viaan. (She keeps her head on the grave and cries) I'm so sorry. I have been such a bad mother, such a bad person. First you left me and now my daughter also hates me. Ab agar Shivaay bhi mujhse nafrat karenge na tab bhi mujhe shock nahi hoga bcz (chuckling sadly) maybe I'm just made for this. Accha chalo ye sab chodo. You remember na tomorrow is your birthday.... yaaayyy. My baby will finally turn 27. OMG. Big boy huh. Great. Hmm... so apni wish ready rakhna, aur mere sapne mein mujhe bol dena kya chahiye, mein laungi ok. Promise. We will celebrate it together, like we both do every year. Just MOMMY AND HER BABY VIAAN. Even your daddy doesn't know till date that since 20 years, I'm coming here to celebrate your birthday. (Taking a deep breath, absorbing all the tears) Chalo now I will leave. Aur haan don't worry I will make the chocolate cake myself only ok and ya also those rainbow cookies and the fruit salad. Don't worry Mumma remembers everything. Ok baby. Bye goodnight. And ya do give your mommy a visit in her dreams ok. I love you baby.

Annika wipes her tears and gets up from ground, finally walking away, giving a last glance to the grave. She walks back to her car and drives back home, unable to notice two would standing behind the tree, broken and crying. Shivaay and Vaani who saw Annika going, came out from their hiding spot and wiped the salty water dripping down their yes, hearing Annika's long speech. Shivaay felt broken while Vaani was disappointed and angry with herself. Both drove back home and saw Annika in the kitchen, baking something. Vaani who wasn't able to control herself, ran and back hugged Annika, pouring out all her tears. Annika looked at Vaani startled. She looked at Shivaay who was standing in front of her with red eyes.

A: What happened Vaani. Are u hurt baby. Tell mom. Did dad say anything. Shivaay what happened to her. Did I again do something which hurt you.... say something plz...

V: You were never at fault mom. It has always been me. I'm so sorry mom. I'm so sorry. I promise, now I will never do anything without your permission. I promise. And ya I also promise you that we will bake the chocolate cake and the rainbow cookies with fruit salad together ok.....

Saying this Vani hurriedly went to her room wiping her tears off. Annika looked at Shivaay with questioning eyes, finally understanding the meaning of her daughters words.

A(low tone): Why did u say everything to her. She is still a kid.

S: She needed to know it Annika. After all Viaan also has some relation with her. Don't worry. Plus I could t see my wife all gloomy after hearing Vaani's words... and it better if we clear everything right now bcz then it might be bad for the future.

A: Hmm I understand Shivaay. Thank you so much for always being my constant support. You know I can't even imagine my life without you, your support, your love. If u wouldn't have been there years ago for me, then I wouldn't have survived after Viaan's death. But u stood strong for me, hold g up your tears. Thank you Shivaay for also explains everything to Vaani so easily.

S: But I'm angry. Why didn't you tell me that you always went to the grave for his birthday. I AM HIS father.

A: Sorry. But tomorrow we theres will go and celebrate his birthday there. Look it's almost gonna be 12. Just 5 more seconds.

They Botha good up and counted the remaking seconds. Finally it struck 12. Annika and Shivaay hugged each other.

Annika/Shivaay: HAPPY BIRTHDAY VIAAN.

Vaani who came downstairs came in and joined Shivika in the hug and also yelled:

V: HAPPY BIRTHDAY BIG BRO.

Shivaay took out Viaan's picture and the three kissed the photo. The trio hugged each other tightly, with Viaan smiling at them from Heaven.

THE END!!!
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So here is the next part of Broken Dreams OS. This one was very emotional to write and took a lot of time to develop the dialogues too. No exaggeration but I cried while writing that grave scene. It was damn touchy was me. Hope you all liked it. Do comment your views on this alternative ending. Also do vote on the OS "TAARON KE SHEHER" and make it reach 100+ votes soon.

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