Hi this is a quick review if you want revisions or if you notice a mistake i made, correct me and I will read the character bio again for corrections. Hope you enjoy and learn from my review that's what my reviews are all about!😁😁😁

👨🙇 Syns-to-Ink

Description: ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ 7/10

The description of your character was short and sweet, but my only problem is that it was a bit too basic. It was okay that it was short it just wasn't descriptive or imaginative enough for me.

Name: ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ 9/10

It's nice and it's not completely forgettable. Me personally not saying everyone but i did forget Adrian's first name for some reason, but that's just me!

Personality: ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ 10/10

Reading the first chapter of your book really helped me connect with King, he's such a complex character and his Personality as a whole is done so right his personl thoughts and dialogue is so great!

Interactions with other characters: ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ 9/10

I really liked Adrian's Interaction with the girl in the first chapter, i was really connected and invested in his whole character and how he kinda felt bad for the girl which i liked, my only problem is that this kinda goes against his actaul nature just a bit because i do like consistency but the interactions are very detailed and engaging. The conversation between characters is realistic and i like that, you described him a bit differently from what I've read so far about him but it's okay because he's written so well!

Did i enjoy the character: ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ 10/10

I really really really enjoyed your character! Especially written down! He's complex and a great guy on the inside!

Growth throughout story: ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ 10/10

King is trying to carryout his job so he can be free of the burden, which is a good and interesting storyline but most of all the character is trying to accomplish something good for his own wellbeing. Great! He grows so much throughout his journey just to accomplish his biggest goal. That's a great and positive goal!

You are a very good writer! You make wonderful stories and even better character's good job! You impressed me greatly👍⭐

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