Hi this is a quick review if you want revisions or if you notice a mistake i made, correct me and I will read the character bio again for corrections. Hope you enjoy and learn from my review that's what my reviews are all about!😁😁😁

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Name: ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ 9/10

It's a very unique name with a slight ring to it! Unfortunately to me when i first read Emiko's last name i almost immediately forgot it. Not saying change the last name because it's great! Just work on naming future characters with names that are easy to remember and hard to forget. I know i may seem like a hypocrite😂 especially with one of my characters being name Lavender Sekishishoku but i try not to not focus on Lavender's full name and instead give him a short nickname that's extremely simple like Laven.

Personality: ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ 7/10

Personally i can actually relate to what Emiko is going through especially the bullying and people talking behind her back bit, but my major issue is that she's kinda of a Mary sue her character bio really reminded me of some of the personality a mary sue has, although she isn't completely one. Also i wish she was a bit stronger as a character just a bit. Letting people run over you and letting it happen and continue is the weakest thing a character and a real life person can do, trust me i was that weak person who would let people run over me because i wanted to be nice.

Interactions with other characters: ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ 8/10

In all honesty her Interactions with other characters are pretty realistic👌 my only problem is that sometimes her character comes off a bit weak at times. Even with the ending as a Adult and her kinda getting over her past is still not very strong and in-depth character development that shows me she is way stronger then she use to be she got a bit stronger but the bio doesn't really go into enough detail on how she learned how to help herself.

Did i enjoy the character: ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ 7/10

I want to feel bad for the character but sometimes the events in the story and her life events are all over the place and sometimes her weakness which is my major issue get's in the way of me enjoying her as a character. Not gonna lie i can definitely relate with having depression and being bullied for majority of my life, but i didn't let those things make me completely weak especially when I'm a adult i don't want the past to ruin my adulthood. I would seek help and learn how to slowly get over my past. I understand her being younger and not being that strong but as a adult there should definitely be a drastic change in character. Rather she completely loses her mind or she's a stronger women because of what happend to her.

Growth throughout story: ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ 6/10

I can see that you tried to give Emiko some character growth but the delivery of it was very vague and not enough to be considered character development. It was almost like at the end Emiko was the same exact person she was in her teenage years, which in most cases in most people there's a drastic change especially in adulthood.

Thank you for submitting 💜 you have potential especially as a artist because Emiko's character design is beautiful, i would suggest working on character development, making stronger characters, and putting more emotion into your story. Other than that if i made a mistake let me know and i will fix it accordingly. Thank you for the submission, stay safe, and have a wonderful day😁👌