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COSTUMES FOW WEDDING

shivi: their 2nd wedding; pandya family except suman: 2nd shivi wedding; suman, anita and prafulla: shiva-disha engagement; jagat: 1st shivi wedding

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task for readers: read this part and tell how many scenes I recreated from the show

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[the scenes are going in parallel...one in pandya niwas other in raavi's house]


"aree jaldi jaldi haath chalo bhaiya....humare nikalne se yeh sab khatam karna hai aapko" orders gautum to the workers.



"heyy somnaath abhi tak dwaar ki sajaawat puri nhi hui.....baarat ka time hone wala hai...." Yells jagat while inspecting the decoration of wedding hall.



Dh: (loudly) rishita!!!!! Tu tayaar hui ya nhi?


Ri: (coming in hall) ho gyi Bhabhi......(twrils in her lehnga)


Dh: (amazed) waah.....


Ri: aree jao Bhabhi....aa bhi tyaar ho jao.....


Dhara goes to get ready.



Pr: (yells) aee anita tera hardik ko photo bhejna ho gya ho toh raavi ko bhi dekhle......


An: (keeping her phone aside) ji phui.....



"aee dhara....dekh teri ladli samhal nhi rhi...." Yells suman holding gaura's almost 2 yrs old daughter tara who is crying for mobile.


Kr: aree maa....lao mujhe do....tara chachu ke saath kheli gi.....


Tara: bile bile......


Kr: nah...no bile.....hum dance karenge.....


Krish takes her outside.



Ja: prafulla saara intezaam ho gya na?


Pr: hn.....


Ja: thik hai jaa ek baar shagun ka saman dekh le....raavi ke kamre me hai.....


Pr: hn...



Dh: (yells) aree jiski shaadi hai vo kahan hai?.....


Dev: main dekhta hu Bhabhi.....



Dev/pr: (opening the door of their rooms) bhai/raavi tayaar ho gya/gyi?


Shivi turns to them.


Shivi: (smiling) hn


[don't get confused jaise tv pe do scenes ek saath chalte hai vaise hi yahan hai]



Dev & shiva come down. Shiva sits on the chair. Gautum ties his shehra.



Prafulla checks raavi's look and places a kaala teeka behind her neck.



Shivi smiles.



Rishita brings nibu mirch and give it suman.


Ri: (happily) haaye kitna handsome lag raha hai mera dewar.....kisi ki najar na lage.....thu, thu,thu, thu


Everyone chuckles at her excitement.


Ri: haww aap log has kyu rahe ho......mere dewar ki shaadi hai.....khushi nhi hogi voh bhi tab jab devrani meri bestie hai.....(excited)


Su: aee sahi bol rahi hai hai......12 saal baad ghr me shaadi ho rhi hai......haaye mere ghr ki khushiyoon ko kisi ki najar na lage.....


Tara: (runs to shiva) tachu......


She sits on his lap and kisses his cheek.


Shiva smiles seeing everyone's excitement.



Jagat enters raavi's room to call prafulla but as he sees raavi his mind stops. Tears fill up his seeing his daughter in wedding attire.


Ja: (looking her from head to toe) bahut pyaari lag rahi hai.....kisi ki najar na lage meri bachi ko.....


Pr: (teary eyes) aaj chali jayegi apne shiva ke saath hume chod kar....


Ra: (side hugs her) maasi.....aise senti mat ho...khamkha brand new dulhan ka make up kharab ho jayega.....aap kaho toh shiva ko ghr jamai banwa lu😉


Pr: (frightens) na baba na......tu jaa uske saath....do kadam ki duri pe toh ghr hai.....main bula lungi tujhe milne.....


Raavi chuckles at her face.


After two months of the zehr kaand, prafulla apolozised shiva and raavi realizing her mistakes. For raavi, shiva too coorperated. After that, slowly and gradually things became okay between the two family. Prafulla and shiva still used to fight but not in a way that hurt raavi.



As everyone leaves raavi's room, something strikes raavi mind. She jumps out of the window and leave the place without coming in notice. Raavi reaches pandya niwas and sees the relatives dancing in front of the house. Raavi quietly tries to sneak into the house but as she reaches the gate she collides with shiva but in nick of time he holds her. As soon as shiva sees raavi, his body automatically freeze. he gets lost in her beauty. Raavi opens her eyes and sees shiva with smile widely.


Ra: chakra gya na sar.....nhi dekhi na mujhe sundar dulhan.


This brings shiva back to reality. The makes her stand and checks her from head to toe.


Sh: (teasing) actually hn....dekhi hai.....deepika padukone apni shaadi me tujhse achi lag rhi thi.....aur abhi abhi alia ki shaadi hui na.....kya lag rahi thi vo....


Ra: (angrily pushes him) tu na sach me bhoothnaath hai....nayi naweli dulhan ka thoda toh lihaaz kar....


Sh: (controlling his laugh) lihaaz.....tujhe jaisi chipkali ka lihaaz......acha majak tha.....


Ra: hawww......mujhe tujhse baat hi nhi karni.....main jaa rhi hu....


Sh: okay jaa....bye


Ra: (gritting her teeth) main ja rhi hu.....(turns to move)


Sh: (softly) acha sun.....


Ra: (turns to him).....(smiling) hn bol....


Sh: dhyaan se jaana.....


Ra: 😲😲.....(angrily) nhi jaungi....pehle tu meri taareef kar....


Sh: huh....(turns his face to another side)sapno me....


Ra: (making him face her) agr tune abhi tareef nhi ki na, toh mai *makes a kissing pout* tujhe kiss karungi abhi yahin pe.....


Shiva gulps nervously.


Sh: tu...tu.. tu ye kya....


Ra: (teasing) kaisi lag rahi hu main?.....


Sh: b..bahu..bahut sundar.....ek dum deepika.....


Ra: good boy...main chalti hu.....bye....


Saying this raavi leaves. Shiva thinks of his future. This girl gonna make is his life hell by her blackmailing he thought.



It is time for baraat. Everyone was dancing with full energy. Tara dances in krish's arms. Shiva's face shows a different level of happiness. After 30min they reach the venue. As raavi heard the sound, she rushes out of her and reaches the entrance. She sees shiva dancing with others.


Ra: (looking at shiva) haaye kitna pyaar lag raha hai mera dulha......


Raavi rushes out and start dancing with shiva. as raavi come there, shiva stops dancing and admires her.


Ra: (shaking shiva) kahan kho gya?.....khud ki shaadi baar thodi na hoti hai.....chal dance kar hone wali biwi ke saath....


Shiva smiles at her and starts dancing. Prafulla comes out for the rituals and sees raavi there.


Pr: heyy mara bogilaal.....(goes to raavi) kya kar rhi hai andar chal...apne hi dulhe ki baraat me kaun naachta hai....


Sh: (shiva's tone) aee maami.....


Pr: (frighten) m..me..mera matlab ki....ab rashmo ka time ho gya hai na...


Sh: chal thik hai....


Anita takes raavi inside.


Prafulla starts the rituals. Now it was the turn of nose pulling ritual. Prafulla tries to catch nose but shiva didn't let her. So prafulla decide him to tease.


Pr: thik hai mat pakdne de.....tujhe hi late hoga shaadi ke liye........phir muhurat-


Sh: (tensed) nhi nhi....tu pakd pakd....(forwards his head to her)


Everyone chuckles.

https://youtu.be/tNsFM_nZZWs


Mere Preet Laavjo Mahair Haath Valida
Pan Valera Tam Aavjo Maara Valam Valida
Tam Laal No Dariyo Hove Tarsa Valida
Ki Velera Tam Aavjo...
Shiva sits at the alter and raavi comes with anita and her friends.



Ho Tera Piya Itna Haseen
Kaise Mujhse Puche Aaina
Mera Hi Hai Kya Ye Naseeb
Ab Bhi Yaqeen Aaye Na
priest give them garlands. Raavi tries to put but shiva tease her.
Main Teri Nazar Uttaru
Tujhe Jag se Sambhaalu
Koi Aanch Tujhpe Aaye Na..

With help of dev and gautum she finally put the garland. Shiva too puts the garland aroung her neck..
Tujhe Jitna Main Pyar Karu Yaara
Kisi Aur Se Na Kiya
Oh.. Tujhe Toot Ke Jo Maine Nahi Chaaha
Toh Pyaar Hi Kya Kiya Oh..

Tujhe jitna main pyaar karun yaara
Kisi aur se na kiya... ho...


suman ties the knots and bless them. Both stands up for pheras. Both starts taking the vows one by one.


Mere preet laavjo mhari haat valida
Ki velera tam aavjo...(music)

Jagat and prafulla do the kanyadaan ritual.

Ho resham ke dhaage pedon pe baandhe
Maine kahaan the kabhi
Par aasmaan mein apne sitaare
Jud hi gaye phir bhi

Shiva fills raavi's partition with sindoor. Some sindoor falls on her nose. Everyone smiles.

Main teri nazar utaaru
Tujhe jag se sambhaalu
Koi aanch tujhpe aaye na...

he ties the mangal sutr around her neck. Raavi looks at it feeling relieved and happy

Tujhe jitna main pyaar karun yaara
Kisi aur se na kiya
O... tujhe toot ke jo maine nahi chaaha
Toh pyaar hi kya kiya... ho...


They take everyones' blessing. Shiva was reluctant to take maami's blessing but for raavi he does.



Now it was the time for vidaai. Raavi never thought that she would cry this much in her vidai as she will be just some metres away from her maasi-masapaa but on the actual day it hurts.


Ja: (joining hand in front of suman) suman behn....dhyaan rakhna humari bachi ka....phoolon si naajuk hai...


Suman holds his hands and nods admist the tears. Dhara remembers her time and her eyes get filled at this. Rishita gets sad as she didn't expreince this phase of her life.


Raavi and shiva sit in the car and krish drives it off. Althrough the way, shiva held raavi's hand to make her calm.


All reaches home and this was the time for garhpravesh. Shivi looks at each other happily while everyone does the preparation for the ritual.


Kr: (teasing) aaj kisi ke chehre ka noor hi alg hai.....


Raavi blushes whereas shiva glares krish.


Dhara and suman do shivi's aarti. Rishita keeps the kalash of rice infront of raavi and asks raavi to kick it with right foot. Raavi being excited hits it so hard that it flew up in the air. It eas about to hit suman but gautum saves her.


Ra: sorry sorry....vo shiva se shaadi ki excitement me .....


Su: agr mere bete ki shaadi nhi hoti toh batati tujhe...


Everyone chuckles. After this rishita place the kumkum thali infront of raavi and she makes her the foot prints on the white clothes.



They both sit in aangan to do post wedding ritual.


[I'm not goona write the ring ritual coz I can't recreate it in a better way. So I gonna write a post wedding ritual done in my tradition. Though it is done before the vidaai but I am writing it here. Meaning of this ritual is same as the ring ritual. So this is called kangkan ritual. In this, bride and groom has to open the knot of the the hanky tied on each other wrist (there is one more ritual done before marriage there they tie this hanky, this hanky consist of some auspisous thing). This has to be done with one hand only. The one who does this in less time wins. After this the things inside the hanky is soaked in turmeric water with a kalawa and gold chain. One of the person from the groom family throws that bunch towards the pair 7 times. Whom so ever catch it more number of times wins the game]



Dh: chalo shiva-raavi...ab Kangkan ki rashm karo....tum dono ko apne ulte haath se apne partner ke rumaal ko kholna hai...dono ko ye ek saath karna hai...


Shivi sits facing each other and starts the ritual. Raavi's long nails benefits her a lot. Finally, raavi unties it first. Everyone teases shiva.


Ri: aree wah!...ab toh raavi ki chalegi.....


Su: aree kyun...abhi ek aur rashm baaki...hai....


Dh: maa mujhe toh lagta hi raavi jeetegi....


Sh: Bhabhi ye jaroori hai kya ki jo jeete life me uski hi chale barabaari bhi toh ho sakti hai.....


Raavi looks him with pride.


Ra: hn di....haar jeet se koi fark nhi padta....(looks at shiva) humesha barabari rahegi.....


Dh: (smiles) mujhe nhi pta tha mere bache itne samjhdaar hai.....acha chalo rashm toh karo.....


Dhara makes the bunch and soaks it in turmeric water. Gautum throws it towards shivi. Shiva wins in this game. Raavi's bangles set played a cupid this time.


[in real life this only happens, bride wins first one coz of her nails and losses the second coz of bangles.]


After all the ritauls everyone gets freshen up. In evening, Gautum, dev and shiva goes to shop for some work.


At night all have their dinner and retires to their room. But shiva was really nervous today. suhagraat. Dev and krish observes shiva and finds this as the best opportunities to tease him. they go to him and starts teasing shiva with their talks. After a while gautum too joins them and pulls shiva's leg. (teasing session is same as in show, no change). Shiva gets frustrated and walks away.


Shiva musters up courage and goes inside his room. It was fully decorated and raavi was sitting in the middle of bed with veil covering her moon like face. He nervously sits on the bed.


Sh: chip.chip.chip.chipkali.....tujhe kya bolu....tu toh sab jaanti hai....maina tujhse ek hi wada karunga jo pandya store costumers se kart ahu...imandari ka...sachai ka....pehle bhi kar chukka hu phir bhi karunga....


No response from raavi.


Sh: hum toh ek dusre ko bach..bachpan se jaante hai.....3..3saal se date kar rahe hai....phir bhi tujhe nhi lagta aaj kuch alg sa hai....hn


No response.


Sh: (removing the veil) chipkali main tujh-


As he removes the veil he gets minor heart attack. It was not raavi he was talking to, it was a matka dulhan.


Raavi, who was hiding behind cupboard, comes out laughing. Shiva turns to her but instead of getting angry he gets lost in her smile. Raavi mimics his expression teasing him.


Shiva genltly holds her hand and pulls her towards him. her hand lands on his chest and her head on his shoulder. Raavi slowly looks up in his eyes. Shiva takes out a box from his pocket. Raavi raises her eyebrows to him. he makes her sit on bed and put her feet on his lap. He opens the box. He brought a pair of anklets for her. He makes her wear the anklets.


Sh: ab toh maine tujhe apne saath bandh liya hai....ab tujh kahin nhi jaane dunga aur agr tu gyi toh iss paayal awaj se tujhe dhoond lunga.....


Raavi smiles at him. shiva gently places a kiss on her foot. Raavi closes her eyes in sensation. She gets up and tries to move but shiva holds her wrist and makes her turn towards him. he goes near her. A different kind of feeling comes in her heart. They had been closes many times in past 3 yrs but this is different. Shiva holds her face and comes more close insisting a kiss. But raavi, being playful, pushes him on the bed and giggles. Shiva huffes at this. He pulls her on him and glares her. Raavi looks here there being shy. She gets up and stand facing other side breathing heavily. Today, their proximity was affecting her differently. Shiva gets up on his elbow and smiles at her. He gets up from bed and hugs her from behind.


Sh: (smiling) tu ghabra kyun rhi hai....tere comfort se jayada kuch zaroori nhi hai......


Ra: shiva humesha ladki ka comfort kyun dekhte hai.....kya ladko ka consent kabhi maayane nhi rakhta.....


Sh: pta nhi.....par mujhe bahut acha laga uss din jab tune mere consent ko bhi ehmiyat di thi(read part 21)


Raavi turns to him and leans forward. They get so close that they could feel eachother's breath.


Ra: (innocently) tu comfortable hai shiva?


Shiva pridely smiles and says 'I LOVE YOU'

https://youtu.be/LMnJp_dSdnw


Iss qadar tu mujhe pyaar kar
Jise kabhi na main sakoon phir bhula
Zindagi layi humein yahan
Koi iraada toh raha hoga bhala

Raavi gently places her lips on his. Slowly they kisses each other with love, passion and respect. shiva rests his hand on her waist while raavi hand went around his neck deepening the kiss. 
Ki darkhaast hai yeh
Jo aayi raat hai yeh
Tu meri bahon mein duniya bhula de

They part away and looks each other with so much love.
Jo ab lamhaat hai yeh
Bade hi khaas hai yeh
Tu meri bahon mein duniya bhula de

shiva again kisses her. this time more passiaonately

(music)

Shiva lifts her up in bridal style and takes her to bed. He gently place her on bed and pushes the staute aside

Ki darkhaast hai yeh
Jo aayi raat hai yeh
Tu meri bahon mein duniya bhula de

Shiva kisses her neck collar bones. She holds shiva very close herself feeling his touch.

Jo ab lamhaat hai yeh
Bade hi khaas hai yeh
Tu meri bahon mein duniya bhula de

Raavi flips their positions. She kisses him on neck and slowly undid the buttons of his kurta. Shiva smiles at her.

Raahon mein mere sath chal tu
Thaame mera hath chal tu
Waqt jitna bhi ho haasil
Sara mere naam kar tu (x2)

Shiva interwines his hand with hers and kisses them. His other hand caress her waist. while she keep making love to him.
Ke armaan hai yeh
Guzaarish jaan hai yeh
Tu meri baahon mein duniya bhula de

Shiva again turns over her. raavi again claims hi lips.
Jo ab lamhaat hai yeh
(Jo ab lamhaat hai yeh)
Bade hi khaas hai yeh
(Bade hi khaas hai yeh)

 He gently slides one of the sleeves of dress and kisses her bare shoulder, neck and chest. Raavi takes a deep breath.

Tu meri baahon mein duniya bhula deeee.....

The night witnesses the union of two lovers.


Next morning, sun ray hits raavi. Raavi wakes up and looks at their postion. She blushes remembering the last night. She slowly unengales herself and gets freshen up.

Everyone gathers for breakfast. Krish and dev passes teasing looks shiva. shiva ignores them.

Ga: raavi.....teri kal chutti khtam ho rhi hai pta hai na?

Ra: ji gaumbi....kitna saara account pending ho rha ho ga.....

Yes, after raavi's m.com she joined pandya supermarket as an account. Dev & shiva are handling that branch.

Ga: ek kaam kar ravi kuch dino ki chuti aur le le.....

Ra: kyun gaumbi....

Gautum does an eye gesture to shiva. shiva gives some papers to raavi. Ravi opens them and gets shocked. it's the ticket for Jaipur.

Ra: shiva ye.....

Sh: (raising his eyebrows) kyun nhi jana?....


Ra: nhi.....hn jana hai par store-


Dev: hum samhaal lenge...tum dono jao aur enjoy karu....


Ri: hn raavi....ghr aur store ki tension chodo....ghoom ke aao


Ga: aur vaise bhi iske baad tum logo ko seedhe chutti hardik aur anita ki shaadi me milegi


Hardik turns red while all laughs. Shiva stands in front of raavi.


Sh: aee chipkali.....jayada ban mat mujhe pta hai tujhe Jaipur hi jana hai sabse pehle....saaman pack karle...(winks) kal subh nikalna hai.....


Raavi blushes at this.


Everyone: hmmmmm....(teasing)


Su: kal jahan jana hai jana....abhi somanth mandir jao......ek baar Jaipur se aa jao toh puja kar denge...


Shivi: ji maa


Shiva waits for raavi outside. She comes and sits on bike. Shiva adjust his rare view mirror in such a way that he could see raavi. He drives the road without talking. he knew that was feeling a bit shy after last night. So shiva, to break this ice, applies sudden break making her fall on him.


Ra: shiva kya kar rha hai?


Sh: ek chipkali hai....kal raat toh chipak ke soyi.....par subh se paas hi nhi aayi....kya karu


Ra: kuch mat kar....gadheda.....


They reach the temple. They stand in the line. Shiva very protectively holds her hand.


Ra: shiva haath toh chod....


Sh: (shakes his head)......abhi yaaken nhi hua ki saath hai....darr hai ki kahin ye ek sapne ki tarha tut na jaaye.....pehle mujhe yaakeen karne de phir chodunga.


Raavi smiles at him and his innocence.


They go inside and prays for their coming future.

shivi: (in mind) heyy somnath ji....aaj itni mushkilo ke baad aakhir hum ek ho gya....please inn khushiyoon ko kisi ki najar mat lagne dena.....hume aur humare pariwar ko kabhi haarne mat dena....aur zindagi me aage badne ke liye shakti dena

 both opens their eyes and looks each other with a big smile.


SCREEN FREEZES



THE END.........


and here I mark the end of my 'OUR LITTLE SERCET-RECREATING SHIVI'......🥺🥺

tried my level best to recreate the wedding....and about sr, mujhe isse jyada nhi aata likhna🙈🙈hope I kept upto your expectations.......

hope you liked this part🤗🤗those who were expecting me write all the ritual really sorry guys but I didn't want to drag it for another month....already this ff completed 4 months on 15th april😅😅😅

do comment and vote......tell me the favourite and hated portions of this ff......all types of comment are welcome....ye last part hai....chaho toh bhar bhar ke gaali bhi de sakte ho🤭🤭🤭

Thanks guys for all the love you showered on me🤗🤗🤗your vote and comments really motivates me for working harder......hope this support will never leave my side😊😊😊

really sad to end this, but I have to......will keep writing os on shivi and will be starting a new ff(not shivi based) soon......I would love if you support aal my work like this🤗🤗🤗

THANKS A LOT FOR READING........


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