Title:
The hoodie boy

Author:
hhhansolie

Review:

The cover was fantastic but it didn't seem to be like the one for Action genre. It was more like some calm or humour stories. I would love if you would change the background of the cover.
The title was pretty good and suited too. I loved your title as it was accurate and short!
Descriptions was too too short. Make it an average one (not too long and not too short) and a suspenseful one as action or adventure is not good until and unless it's suspenseful. Yours wasn't helping at all about.... making me excited or curious!

First chapter was lovely with least grammatical mistakes. It was just awesome. Everything was described in such a way that I felt like "Oh! My god! I am experiencing those." Just keep this good work Author!!

Character development was good. I liked the change of Hoonjong that was a calm person in school but a kind of devil at night. It is really an awesome story.

Plot was good too. No, not good it was awesome. Keep up the good work. It is sure an amazing book!

Grammar was perfect. Just completely perfect. It was Mwwuuaaahhhh!

Rating: 5 out of 5.5 (If it was according to me I wanted and surely would have given 5.4)

PS
Everything I said was my opinion if I have said anything wrong then please forgive me!
And all the best of your future!❤️