@jirachi8

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Name: Bayleaf
A bit odd for a Chikorita, but I'll give a good review on this for the reason of her name. 7/10

Age: 15
Okay. 10/10

Species: Chikorita
Never before have I seen a Chikorita OC. 10/10!

Personality: Stingy, b*tchy, only looks out for number 1
Interesting personality, definitely uncommon, but what does "only looks out for number 1" mean? And maybe you should've added a bit more to the personality. 8/10

Likes: Being alone
Definitely uncommon. Good! But maybe a bit more added to what she likes? 8/10

Dislikes: Being helped, or being around others
So she's independent? You should've added this in the personality of its true. But I won't leave a bad review on it for that. 8/10

Backstory: When she hatched she was alone, so she's had to fend for herself and grown to like the loneliness
It does explain her personality, likes and dislikes. Maybe if it was a bit longer, it would've gotten a perfect score. 8/10

Moveset: Leaf Blade, Sleep Powder, Vine Whip, Stunspore
Nice moves. 10/10

Other: has trust issues
Okay. 9/10

It's also indicated that her name is Bayleaf because the creator thought Bayleaf was Chikorita.

Overall score: 78/90
It's a store out of 90 for the nine things applied in your form. This is a very good overall mark! Good job on creating Bayleaf the Chikorita!

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